I appreciate that someone took time to "translate" this, but this work already has a group working on it. The group obviously puts in a lot of effort with cleaning, translating, and typesetting because the previous chapters are clean and easy to read. This chapter is quite clearly translated using a MTL and is basically incoherent - the quality is just terrible. Maybe the uploader just saw the raws and wanted to share, not knowing what they were doing, but this discourages actual translation groups from continuing a work if there's a possibility that someone will disregard their hard work in favor of some messy, nonsense translation. I hope the actual group doesn't drop the series because of this!
This story was so hard to follow. So many plot points were brought up that were never concluded or weren't well established. The time jumps didn't serve the story well at all. Instead of adding intrigue, they just made the story difficult to follow. I even can't get into everything because there were so many things I found annoying.
The art was pretty but the story was so cliche and boring. I feel like I've seen it so many times. Also, super uncomfortable with the fact that they've had a sibling relationship since childhood. Like yeah they're not blood related, but the older brother has known him since he was a toddler and has acted as a parent to him for 10 years.