this makes me kind of sad because i can see the potential in this story but i just feel like it’s lacking.. the time skip, the instant sex? no healing era? i just feel like it’s missing something and it was so rushed. this wouldve been really good if it had more chapters and went deeper into explaining everything.
coming back to read this because idc what anyone says this story will forever break my heart. the husband cheating on lewis and lewis still loving him until his last breath was the saddest thing ever. no matter how many times the dr tried to make lewis’ last moments happy. it was just such a heartbreaking story. i really don’t feel bad for the husband because he was an abuser and a cheater but seeing him completely crumble after lewis died was a very sad thing to witness because death is sad. this story overall is just so tragic and it never fails to break my heart ;(
i want to start this off by saying i think this is the potential waterside night could’ve had with the whole debt thing. ok now i don’t usually prefer omegaverse (i’ve said this 100 times and i keep reading them at this point im only trying to convince myself) but this was so beautiful. i wasn’t sure if i was going to like it at first because i didn’t like how jae-in was treating taeyoon but then i grew to love jae-in T~T. i’m such a sucker. and jae-in’s backstory was just too sad not to sympathize with. oh i also love sang-wook. and jaeyoon?!? he’s so so cute oh em gee i love babies. but jeong-hyuk and his little minion… they were pissing me off so badly i almost couldn’t take it. especially the minion i forgot his name but the one that shot taeyoon, like how are you going to determine what’s best for jae-in and when he’s the happiest?! he clearly wasn’t happy with jeong-hyuk but that bastard just kept pushing. overall 10/10 story i very much enjoyed and im sad its over.
i wish we got to see more of them as an actual couple and see their relationship progress. we mostly only saw the sad side of them. i also wish we got to see more of tobitas point of view, it might have just been me but it was hard to tell what he was feeling at times because of his blank expression and words. i could only sense emotion during the bdsm acts. i just wish it was longer so we could see them progress more and see them as two people in love not just two people using each other for pleasure.