I like the concept, just feel like it was poorly written? It’s super cute, just a bit off?
personally for me, it's the flow that makes it feel off. it's j way too much whiplash
Faces were mafia and attorney. Love the submissive top but also want the dom mafia
How dare you end with a wet dream? We need the reality, and we need a fountain, and a dry one too.
A lot of grooming, and he is being very obvious about it, unapologetically. But I will continue because I sense some hot hot sexy time.
In BL they never have ED, they just need some dick.
lol true for most stories but this one story even despite getting dick he couldn’t get hard just was able to cum
Ummm. Why did he age like 20 years instead of 8???
Most likely stress
Me when I spent one senior year and I welcome college looking like in my 40s
Ummm. The angst is through the roof.
This alpha is a manipulative bastard. I kinda just want our omega to find peace and enjoy single mother life. It’s too fucking late to recognize those feelings you fucker.
He can't even manipulate his own life haha, he is just an idiot
Oh my god. I don’t think I’ve laughed this much since semantic error.
Ummm. What PP juice???? We need to see all the weird “gym” workout please. Too bad it’s over. Kinda liked it even if it was so unsanitary.
Milk, not juice, so possibly worse. The ML saying he needed to fill it up for MC...um.
I like the concept, just feel like it was poorly written? It’s super cute, just a bit off?
personally for me, it's the flow that makes it feel off. it's j way too much whiplash