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CH 9–Who DA PHUC just wraps their arms around someone you barely know and say: I missed you.
MC doesn’t seem right in the head. I think doing all those gigs got him mentally challenged. (Half satire.) Besides that, after reading up to CH 20, I am genuinely concerned with the MC, he needs a therapist. He shouldn’t feel like he’s a burden, he shouldn’t be letting ML use him.
And no way the ML just called MC an easy lay. Asshat. I do agree the MC seems very guillable though. Bro said he might be falling for ML, you met him a few days ago! Someone help him.
CH 10) ML— “A hole is a hole.”
CH 13– MC is the strange one (but understandable) for even thinking they’re dating, BRO YOU MET ML LIKE SOME DAYS AGO and NO TALK ABOUT ROMANCE was done either.
I blame his parents. And ML, damn, he is hurtful but he’s being honest—he isn’t leading MC on.
CH 16– ML giving red flags. I don’t like using colored flag to label characters as it can be vague, but whatever I’m feeling lazy. “How did I find this off the streets?” BIG TIME ASSHOLE.
CH 18– “It's none of my business if he gets passed around.” —ML.
MC never gonna tell ML about his problems because ML said: “Don’t get other people involved in your sob story.”
And he also said: “Why do you keep making me pick up after you?”—MC recalled what ML said and said to himself, that he shouldn’t be a burden.
ML invited him to (well kidnapped technically) his place, but didn’t even feed him, just put him in the house and left. Even the Secretary looks more appealing than him at this point. What’s up with these types of MLs always lacking affection, even sex buddies can be affectionate! What’s stopping him?
CH 18– MC took a shower and stayed in the house like Ml told him. He wished the ML would come back and spend time with him, but even just wishing for that, MC felt like he was being greedy.
MC never had a proper childhood, his parents would leave him at home alone. Oh poor boy. ML step up your game!