I hope my my whole heart his next work gets completely ignored because everyone knows how awful he is at finishing plot points, this was so unsatisfying that it felt like a drag reading the last chapter...orz
As far as the story has made us believe, Ignat is the last dragon around those mountains so the only dragon who could've burned the village is him,,, am I just being pessimistic?? I'm concerned for the angst to come ╥﹏╥
I'm trying to focus on the story but I can't stop looking at the moomin in the kid's playground AAAAAAA
Even the shadowy entity was more interesting as Rachel than the MC, now we go back to plain female lead
The ppl new to Harada-sensei are not ready for the real fucked up stuff to come, this is the most tame manga I've ever read of her and it's funny how ppl are proving her right by reacting so aggressively to even this tame work of her.
The whole theme of finding joy in the exploration of weird stuff that was navigated in the first volume flew over everyone's head, it's really sad to see how Harada feels limited by this new internet culture of shame in this oversensitive era ( ̄ε(# ̄)Σ.
I can't keep rushing every time a 5 page long chapter drops this is ridiculous
Leaving aside the incest thing it's just horribly written.
Every shot drawn with women in weird positions ends up being more sadly comical than sensual bc the author probably doesn't know shit about building up sexual tension, the sensuality is just not there XD
We're not even going to talk about the interactions between characters because we know it feels fake and it's just bad, the chemistry flew out the window.
Other pathetic part and the thing that ruins the story is how the women's clothes are ridiculously attached to their figures, undressing slowly is part of the "edging" and that ruins the expectation.
An extra thought: it's disappointing is how the feelings of guilt because of the "incest"(? are not even explored, they just go "oh no I know this is wrong but anyways", if the characters are doing something taboo at least make it feel like what they're doing is like grabbing a forbidden fruit, make their interactions outside of intercourse more complicated while they try to disguise their indecent secrets in front of others, like,,, at least make it interesting if you're gonna do weird porn troupes bruh
This became more of a lesson of writing porn for beginners rather than a review lol ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭
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- Author: Tokishiba, AKATSUKI Amama, AKAGI Gishou, MATSUMOTO Noda, AMAMIYA Kayou, Miwa, Uzui, Arakata, KOMOTOMI Yuuma, OKAZ Mari
- Genres: Yaoi / Smut / Comedy / One Shot
If you're used to yankee stories you're gonna find this one appealing, it's not that outstanding or interesting like Nakaseteyaruyo Yankee-kun, Abarenbo honey, Megumi and Tsugumi, and others but it has its charm. The story here is simple and there's little exploration of their relationship unlike in the other works I mentioned so use this as a recommendation if you want to find interesting works.
I understand not everyone is strong to digest these stories and maybe that's why there were various comments saying it was bad (〜 ̄△ ̄)〜
Megumi, an Alpha, son of the great Kokonoe Academy Chairman, goes to avenge his friends who were bea...
- Author: Si Mitsuru
- Genres: Romance / Yaoi