Not really my jam. I like this genre, don't get me wrong. But I just can't enjoy sex scenes where the seme rams the uke who has never done anal before without lube and the uke starts bleeding and crying. I can enjoy stuff where the author just completely ignores the prep work that needs to be done for anal to get to the smut itself for the sake of the fantasy, or even stuff where the uke's first time hurts so badly that they cry. But the blood. The tearing. The hole will be destroyed! And not in the sexy way!
When I read this kind of thing, it's hard to think about anything besides how absolutely knackered the uke's body will be after. That's a hospital visit. And it never seemed like the sex got less dangerous over the course of the story. Usually with stories where a character succumbs to pleasure, the sex is written to seem pleasurable. But this author appears to believe that masochists want to be fucked all the way into a coffin rather than simply getting off on pain.
And I KNOW that it wouldn't be a porn comic without the character doing the fucking telling the character who's being fucked that they "tighten up" as a sign that they're aroused. But it just doesn't work as dirty talk when it's previously established that the uke is so tight and unlubricated that his asshole bleeds. Equating tightness with arousal is (obviously) wrong and kind of shitty. But I can overlook it a lot of the time as just a trapping of the medium. But here it's like? His asshole never relaxed in the first place? We never got a scene where the dick goes in easy. So imagining this guy tightening up is to imagine hell on planet hemorrhoids.
Honest question, but do you into every story thinking you'll find realism in every (o4 any) aspect? You say you like the genre, but it doesn't seem you understand what genre you're referring to when you're reading a fictional story about a character transported to another plane of existence where he's got to fxck a magical deity so he can get back to his world and you're criticizing the semantics of sex preparation?
Unless it's a highly realistic story that explores all these details and the progress of a relationship and would greatly help the narrative and our investment in the characters etc, then depicting what you're talking about is unlikely since it doesn't affect the "barely there plot" and superficial entertaining goal with which it was created for in the first place.
I love a scruffy seme, but it's a bit sad when an artist just uses it as an excuse for a transformation and doesn't let us see the guy's sloppy side from time to time
So much focus put on pervy brat's age, but all we get to know about old man's age is that he's old? I've seen yaoi manga call 27 year olds old men. That's not enough info!
Their bickering before finally becoming official pissed me off so baddddddd. I really like them hehe. It was such a stupid argument that made so much sense for their characters. I enjoyed the story, but I wish Josh's relationship baggage was explored a liiiiiittle bit more. And the thing with the photo? "I'm gonna put this photo of him and his ex-fiance in an empty frame he has :3" *never comes up again*. But yeah. Liked it. Good and short.
People have a problem with the main character not realizing that the seme is his friend, but that's because the mc is a superficial person who values the idea of popularity and having a friend group over actually maintaining his friendships. He doesn't know most of these people in the same way they don't really know him. He recognizes the subculture they belong to, the clothes they wear, but not who they are. The only person in his friend circle he really recognizes is Suu. And that's because Suu is both an exceptionally open person and the unspoken leader of the group. It stands to reason that somebody so hung up on hard lines between types of people wouldn't even consider that the guy who he doesn't really pay attention to anyways would have an alter-ego that presents in such a radically different way.
Also, as a faceblind person who has had friends with natural hair colors: if somebody with a face that doesn't have any uncommon features parts their hair different and adds/removes glasses, it is really really hard to be confident that they aren't a completely different person.
All that to say, I'm obsessed with this story's premise and if anybody has recs for other yaoi where a character disguises themself for ANY REASON, please let me know. Or yuri/het. I'm not picky.
I feel like the problem with the redrawn dicks in this is more that there was no regard for matching the lineart or shading styles and the lack of cleaning around where the dicks were drawn. The art itself was totally fine, it's just that the dicks stood out because of how they clashed with everything else. I'm sure with more practice in replicating styles the redrawer will be able to work more seamlessly.
Begging you to go back and look at the panel where we first see the ml jacking off. He stands so far away from the toilet. He's trying to score a 3-pointer or something. Maybe cis men actually jerk off standing multiple feet from the toilet, I've never been one so I wouldn't know. But to me that seems like playing with fire.
Good yaoi
dawg u so fucking funny