Not gonna lie but this feels like I’m reading a Wattpad. There’s like no substance to how they talk especially the Ml, it feels weirdly straight forward and kind of random. The quote with the mc’s trauma to drugs…like why though?!!
The main couple was good but the development to their relationship seemed really quick like we needed more context (chapters). The second couple though #-.-), wasn’t great, nothing new, very unnatural and unnecessary.
Not gonna lie but this feels like I’m reading a Wattpad. There’s like no substance to how they talk especially the Ml, it feels weirdly straight forward and kind of random. The quote with the mc’s trauma to drugs…like why though?!!
https://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/dog_and_bird/uu/br_chapter-231731/pg-1/
Pg 24
at least he’s not taking the drugs bc usually in the stories yk how it goes