tiredrandom December 30, 2024 10:18 am

This one looks cute but bittersweet. The art is so beautifull !! I hope some english publishers notice this author, they deserves to get an official physical release !!

tiredrandom December 29, 2024 2:57 pm

Well i made a comment before loving it this story because the top was such green flag. But i take that back, i got really disappointed with how the author went with the story.


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Checked the raws and after the bottom was being dumb in taking a shady job, the top got angry because he believed the bottom used to sell himself from a rumor he heard, got angry and tried to rape the bottom. The bottom got really triggered and freaked out and then the top stopped ... he acted the same way the guy who tried to attack the bottom from the rumor ... after that, the top left feeling sad/guilty.
Super disappointed on him, if the bottom didn't fight back hard he would have been raped.

Then a flashback to when they met. Basically bottom had a super creppy piano teacher who would drug him to sleep and assault the bottom unconscious and film it. The top found out and beat him up, the bottom didn't discover what happened to him.
The top went to prison and with that lost his chances with boxing career and he accepted to go work in a gang if the gang killed the piano teacher. End of flashback.

THEEEN it's up to the bottom to make up with him. The bottom goes to his apartment to talk and clear any misunderstanding. The top is so useless, he didn't even try to apologize. He was just wallowing in self pity before the bottom arrived. The bottom clear all the accusations the top made.
But the top didn't even apologize for you know, trying to rape him?? They made just like that and started dating.



Man, what a disappointment with this story.
In the past the top already misunderstood the bottom because of rumors and got mad that the bottom " maybe " promiscuous. Urgh. But then he saved the bottom from the piano creep and sacrificed his boxing career for the bottom.
But in the present he did the same thing as before because of rumors and was even worse, he tried to rape the bottom when he got mad.
I don't now why the author made this decision. And what irks me is that it absolutely had no consequences because the next day they started dating.
Sincerely it made no sense. The bottom was super scared before and the top was feeling guilty.
And the author decides that the best way for them to make up is for the bottom, the victim, to go talk to him and do all effort in making up. The top is useless, no effort at all in apologizing.
He can just lashes out all he wants and all is good and happy because the bottom just let it go like that. And they start dating and have sex right after.
So so disappointed, the story was so fun but then it takes a bad turn due to bad writing.

    Frarkness December 29, 2024 3:42 pm

    fuck this is disgusting.. thank you for the spoilers im dropping this i dont have time or will to read these kind of stories

    crying January 6, 2025 11:25 am

    you saved me

tiredrandom December 29, 2024 1:33 am

man why the bottom is so dumb
why he would go to that other job and thinks that isn't going to bite him back? the job was obviously shady and the owner wanted to lure him into a shady thing

    xxkurokoxx December 29, 2024 4:26 am

    Bruh he needs money. This seemed like an easy job, and yes it was sketch but he turned down the sketchy offers. ML is just pressing him hard rn

    tiredrandom December 29, 2024 2:14 pm
    Bruh he needs money. This seemed like an easy job, and yes it was sketch but he turned down the sketchy offers. ML is just pressing him hard rn xxkurokoxx

    That was obviously a bad idea. He is smart enough to know the guy is trying to lure him. Sincerely, it felt extremely forced to make him a dumb decision like that.
    I blame on the author.
    Because the story, after that, is just downhill... the ML just becames trash and then a flashback to their youth and back to reality where the bottom has to go talk to the top so they can make up.

tiredrandom December 27, 2024 12:27 pm

the top is such a green flag. i love a king that cares about consent. he barks but we all know is all talk.
he can't stand seeing the person he loves living so miserably so he rushed to help him while putting the front of being an asshole ( even though it's obvious to everyone, including his crush, he is just being a tsundere )

    tiredrandom December 29, 2024 2:08 pm

    My words bite me back :T

    Checked the raws and after the bottom was being dumb in taking a shady job, the top got angry because he thought he sold himself from a rumor he heard, got angry and tried to rape the bottom. The bottom got really triggered and freaked out and then the top stopped ... he acted the same way the guy who tried to attack the bottom from the rumor ... after that, the top left feeling sad/guilty.
    Super disappointed on him, if the bottom didn't fight back hard he would have been raped.
    THEEEN it's up to the bottom to make up with him. The bottom goes to his apartment to talk and clear any misunderstanding. The top is so useless, he didn't even try to apologize. He was just wallowing in self pity before the bottom arrived. The bottom clear all the accusations the top made. But the top didn't even apologize for you know, trying to rape him?? They made just like that and started dating.
    Man, what a disappointment.

    Kai December 29, 2024 2:37 pm
    My words bite me back :TChecked the raws and after the bottom was being dumb in taking a shady job, the top got angry because he thought he sold himself from a rumor he heard, got angry and tried to rape the bo... tiredrandom

    Damn. What a loser.

tiredrandom December 27, 2024 4:11 am

what come on, they just released and it's posted on the same day here? at least wait for few days ...
The creators are indie wlw couple ... they rely on their p treo and the comics ...

    Hiroichii December 27, 2024 6:31 am

    Talk all you want you’re still here like everybody else

    tiredrandom December 27, 2024 6:49 am
    Talk all you want you’re still here like everybody else Hiroichii

    And asking to wait for some days it's gonna kill any of us?

    Zurap December 27, 2024 11:49 am
    Talk all you want you’re still here like everybody else Hiroichii

    She's right though. Waiting for a few days so the author
    can earn more money won't kill us.

    levisnosehair December 27, 2024 12:39 pm
    Talk all you want you’re still here like everybody else Hiroichii

    lmao fr

    Red Velvet December 28, 2024 6:24 pm
    Talk all you want you’re still here like everybody else Hiroichii

    then dont whine and cry if they cancel it

    tiredrandom January 9, 2025 1:38 am
    then dont whine and cry if they cancel it Red Velvet

    yeah, on other note just saw the news that the bl comic frey got paused because the author wasn't making a living from it ... piracy affecting authors is not a debate, it is a fact, but chapters getting leaked ON THE SAME DAY from officials releases is a special type of cruelty towards authors ... people won't even try to buy it if they get leaked on the same day.
    Waiting a few days should be the norm.

tiredrandom December 27, 2024 4:07 am

I really miss his old appearance lol It's so weird seeing so many creeps lusting for his child body

tiredrandom December 26, 2024 8:48 am

oh man this one is gonna be sad

tiredrandom December 25, 2024 5:56 am

this one is soo much fun lol

tiredrandom December 24, 2024 4:34 am

Still think Normal went too low with Shun-kun, it was unnecessarily cruel and it was not his business to meddle.

tiredrandom December 21, 2024 3:28 am

this seems cute !

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