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This might just be my unpopular opinion, but I think if the amount of sex scenes were sparse and less dragged out into 3-4 chapters, it would be more impactful.. idk, I feel like every other scene is just a "session" between these two losers that its starting to not hit the same, when clearly the author is trying to make it more meaningful.
I mean, no shade--I like the story overall but the pacing just feels so offffff and the dialogue/lack thereof feels so out of place??.....
Yes! My exact thought too!
like it feels like a fever dream..... why was there literally NO explanation why the MC decided to let a runaway wounded child reside with him ?? rent free ?? without asking questions or even being curious how the ML got hurt ?? why'd it jump 8 ears and the ML is aggressively pursuing the MC ??? with no questions asked ?? LIKE WHAT IS GOING AWN