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There are so many of us complaining about this one... which goes to show how much potential it had... but they took a decent start in world building and trashed it for... what? omg what did the mc wait so long for, is he really going to confess at this point? Please, no....Ten chapters ago he could have run off to another country and the author could have made the king really work for it, but no... Hell, they could have had the ml waver and have feelings for the aide, or put in a powerful female mage in the mix or something, *anything* to actually have real tension in the plot.
I can't figure out what else the motive would be for purposely trashing a decent story 15-20 chapters in. The thing with the red shoes near the end was so random... and the last scene just makes me wish that Michael would stab the king in the neck and watch him bleed out. That's the only thing that could make this satisfying at this point. The way it is written, it leaves both characters looking extremely flawed - the king is morally weak and Michael is spiritually so.
There was ZERO character growth in this, except maybe Heide learned his lesson and hopefully went off to have a large, happy family. Hell, maybe one of his kids will be talented enough to kill Albert... and the sooner, the better. Maybe a genius mage at the age of 8 or 10 or something.