
imagine neglecting your abused sibling bc they’re a man. IMAGINE IGNORING AND BEING COMPLICIT IN ABUSE OF A CHILD BC YOU THOUGHT HE WOULD SURPASS YOU… omfg. THEN EMPLOYING HER BRO AS SOME LOW-LEVEL EMPLOYEE??? AS WHAT?? A REWARD??- no fucking wonder he’s the way he is. he’s never had anyone and has constantly been called a monster. if i was MC, i would brainwash her investors into divesting and brainwash her secretaries into finding other jobs. ain’t no way she’s gettin outta this scot-free.

they’re making a quirky fun historical story, why did they have to have historically accurate AGES?? like if they’re gonna play the “historical” card why are there even women at school? LET ALONE A CO-ED SCHOOL. cherry picking for historical accuracy is just normalizing an icky relationship. nobles married young bc women would often DIE during childbirth, and bc royals especially aimed for MANY kids, a young (child) wife could theoretically have more kids over her lifetime. also.. pedophilia just permeates royal families. even if he’s being “platonically” friendly/affectionate w her they’re GONNA BE MARRIED BRUH- just make her fuckin 18+. it wouldn’t even change the story.

Yeah they can literally just say FL doesn't go to any noble events because her family is overprotective so she is still not engaged at 18 yrs old. And the fact she looks like a kid next to him.
My biggest issues aside from that is ML is the Crown Prince. He can't hate all women because of political issues. Why does no one put him to therapy? Lolll

what a fucking bitch of a ML. “you look like someone” bitch do you have eyes?? she was ur fiancé for how many years? “wHaT arE yOu DoInG hErE?” SHE GOT MFKIN SOLD YOU DIPSHIT! YOU (ml) SUCK ASS AT COMMUNICATION! ALSO, no aftercare?? no alchemist/medic in house? no contraceptive concoction for the workers? NO LUBE?? AND HE LEFT HER? TRASH. i’m pissed that the prince is endgame. how do you even come back from that- “tee hee i fell in love while i was a prostitute, which i became after he annulled our engagement” bro what? huh?? even if it wasn’t him who sold her, the fact that he “stopped by to see if that was her” is WACK. did you think she deserved it?
if you want to see this trope done WELL, read “The Villainess and the Demon Knight/Akuyaku Reijou to Kichiku kishi”

her mom is shit lmao
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MC is usin her power of foresight to change the future, but her mom fully accepted it and ABANDONED her child. no wonder she turned out fuckin EVIL, her mom abandoned her out of nowhere! emotional neglect FUCKS a kid up, especially bc it went from *love love love* to *ice cold.* the OG villainess accepted her role n leaned into it, being exactly what her mom saw. she was probably trying to seek attention from her mom in any way possible, even if it was negative.

i don’t fuck with this plot tbh. kinda borin, i can’t get into it bc we all know how it ends. older ver MC already *fucked* the timeline by even appearing in the past n talking to her fam. aight. butterfly effect, go off sis.
it’s also def triggering my familial trauma lol
“tee hee i love you now but imma treat you like shit for awhile” (⊙…⊙ ) (me fr)

dragon kin fuckwad is dumb. if you want her to be drawn to you, TREAT HER RIGHT. if you want to “keep” your prized possession, MEET ALL IF HER NEEDS (mental, emotional, physical), but this fool just pump n dumps n traumatizes her. i’m sure the ACTUAL dragon was more romantic than he is ffs.
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broooo… what fuckin redemption ark would be enough??? “hey girlie, ik you practically sold yourself to me to a) survive and b) protect ur family/friends, AND yeahhh ik i’ve literally told you i can’t love you (bc i’m obsessed w you) AND i treated you as a spoil of war, AND i was kinda (hella) emotionally abusive to you while you were dealing with all of that.. BUT i did all that because i’m a dragon kin and bc of trauma </3”
MC would have to be brain dead to accept whatever dragon-fuck says. abusive partners don’t change. she’d have better luck w the actual dragon than the guy w the emotional maturity of a 14 year old boy.
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yah it’s smut, yah it doesn’t need plot.. but the plot they went w is wild. boss secretly likes uke? ok. HOW DOES HE GO ABOUT WOO-ING OUR MC? MAKING HIM DO A SEX LIVESTREAM. (⊙…⊙ ) MANS POPPED HIS CHERRY ON VIDEO??? WITH HIS BOSS?? man that’s an HR issue. he wasn’t hired for that, that shit ain’t in his job description. LET ALONE HIS BOSS (who has a crush on him) SUGGESTIN IT?? then gettin jealous over the stream? only to “accept” the stream as it shows the world how “in love” the couple is? what??
┑( ̄Д  ̄)┍ i’m sure there’s couples out there that stream for similar reasons.. BUT THEY WORK AT A CORPORATE ENTERPRISE. THAT STREAM IS ON THE COMPANYS TAX RETURN BRUH ( ̄∇ ̄")

… nah seriously, what’s the age gap between the main couple? (⊙…⊙ )

Well I’m pretty sure that the baby had to be at least 2 when sigs sister died bc he first went to war at 14 came back a year later at 15 and his sister married the 1st captain he then took him under his wing then he pull the sword the following year so 16 and the baby was born then he came back to find her sick and she died within the year that would be 17 leaving him to kill the 1st captain and become a hero after the age of 18 brun seemed to be in middle school while this happened but the baby/ nephew seems to be in middle school now which confuses the time line for me bc middle school is age 10- 14 so I can’t gage exactly what age brun is but it’s also another 4 years for high school and I’m not sure if knight training is included but say brun was 12 in the 1st chapter then sig would be 18 or above but we’ll say 18 that’s 6 years but 2 + 6 =8 and the nephew is clearly older than 8 I’d say at least 11 so maybe 9 years but I also suck at math and I pieced this time line together with my last 2 brain cells, delusions and limited information
i’d sock tf outta that big-forehead havin ass alpha! he’s constantly degrading the mc. from the beginning he was like “you’re nothing but a bitch in heat” BUT to AGAIN call him a bitch when you’re rescuing him from being R*PED?! wtf is wrong w you? he clearly don’t respect him.
ALSO it doesn’t make sense for blood siblings to react to each others pheromones, they share the same parents so their pheromones must also be similar, also the Westermarck effect (look it up). a family would probably “smell related” based on pheromones too.
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