beta
The art is super cute and the outfits are amazing, but I honestly feel like the main characters have NO PERSONALITY! It feels so generic to me like if I would most definitely forget about this manga in a few days I’m not hours. The communication amongst them is also very surface level and the speed that their relationship developed felt off… like how is YOUR MOTHER gonna tell you not to fall in love ( which felt like a MAJOR plot point), but immediately in the next chapter you’re in love with them with no thought back onto his mother’s words. Why didn’t they talk more about his trauma and why does the mc just cry instead of talking like an adult? Maybe that’s just me, since I HATE crybaby mc’s who couldn’t defend themselves against a bunny even if their life depended on it. On top of that, the mc’s outfits are cute and so is he, but he’s genuinely kinda bland and why does it look like the author is presenting him as a female lead?? If there wasn’t any scenes or if it wasn’t express by the other characters I wouldn’t have known! This manga really reminded me of a shoujo time period story like all we were missing was the antagonist - evil stepmother/stepsibling, inattentive father, a love interest or two, and random mob characters that are only there it create drama ( and they hit all the plot points of your basic time-period story(๑•ㅂ•)و✧)