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Okay okay, let’s set something straight I understand why no one liked the whole Keith liking Dylan part, I honestly thought Keith was going to be a rival. But, y’all need to clock in and realize Dylan never liked Keith and Keith never like Dylan too (with how he made Lucas a cat to recoil with Dylan and the love potion). The whole Dylan being cold it was because of how he felt bad for Lucas saving his life and risking his magic for him to the point where Lucas loses his memory bcuz of that. Lastly, I think the author achieved the message they were trying to convey, yeah the plot felt weak the first 2 chapters but the author redeemed themselves later on. I don’t think this story is a 4 or 5 stars but it was definitely a 3 stars with the concept and the drama.