I get him he wants to be in his daughter’s life and make up for lost time but ripping the child from their safe haven is not the way to go about it. You have to slowly build a bond, just taking them out and then saying outta nowhere you coming is a disaster waiting to happen and it proves you’re not having the child’s interest at mind. Hopefully he not cut off completely.
Some people (nonbinaries, trans-folk, cis-women, gay men) are tired of women writing rape stories of gay men but won’t ever think twice about writing a rape story with women or go on their social media on a full on anti gay/trans tirade. Also just because it’s fictional doesn’t mean people want to constantly deal with it, Black people don’t want to constantly deal with fetishization and racism being portrayed in anime/manga verses every time a Japanese or Korean manga/manhwa author introduces them despite that being fucking fictional.
And even if you wanna take the social political aspects out of this, not every one has to like someone’s art, art is fucking subjective and it will always be and whether people view it for free or not, doesn’t change that nor should block people for saying they don’t like said art or story
Tbh I think the dad made the right choice even if it was mostly motivated to keep the family’s image untarnished. Even though Ewin doesn’t necessarily fight back he will never think of Argios as his partner or even someone above him(this is referring to Argios thinking of controlling him); which is why Argios is always talking about his will shining through his eyes. Also even though the half brother is kinda a lame coward, he does underhand/petty moves just like Argios. If they both put down their inflated egos they will probably make a good pair & the half brother can grow up.
This was ok, not my cup of tea but whatever.l but let’s all get a reality check.
Whether someone brought this oneshot or not, doesn’t change the fact that story is subpar. This new wave of thinking that just because someone consume media via free (illegal site or not just free in general)means they can’t give an opinion on it. That isn’t the case and I wish a lot of y’all on this site stop trying to make it so. Not everyone’s art is going look good to some people. Some people don’t like how One Piece look, doesn’t mean they need to shut up because they aren’t manga artists. You don’t tell people to become rappers if they think some rap song is crap right? Right.
Yeah chapters are gone because of negative people that even went as far as to take a chapter and uploaded on a site that is heavily watched and easy to notify the official site that in turned threatened legal action
This story had more drama and randomness than the American telenovala show Days of Our Lives
Yeah blondie is acting like dumb. I really need our uke to runaway and put him in his place
Hey if there is no response to message I sent yesterday by the 23rd then I will upload the story on the 24th the timing may be off due to the holidays coming up
Blondie is about to make me mad, anyone with a brain could’ve figured out it was the guy who walked in on you last time who made him sad. You little boy stood up to that pervert gangster, like be forreal right now!! And he stop flinching and having mini panic attacks when you tried to be sexual with him and this is what you do?!!!! I need our little baby to start his run away arc since the author hint that he is fast and good at hiding due to past in the creator’s notes at the end of season 1 and pronto (no offense to the author ) Blondie needs to be taught a lesson. (╬￣皿￣)凸
Apparently the author only made 9 chapters probably lost interest while righting and just finished up the story since this was uploaded from Coolmic
I heard that in the novel they “did it” for 5 days twice
(I just noticed that half of my comment was gone! Maybe because I added too many emojis)
But the other half was that —- On a serious note I hope that the manhwa is different than the novel. Since the novel endings tend to leave a gaping hole in my heart and I have to resort to watching my favorite comfort show
Like please no one is siding with the seme. Even if the uke was planning to escape where is the backbone when you literally have a kid. There are plenty of stories featuring the “mom” having to deal with a manipulating rich & powerful partner and still having a stronger resolve than the uke like come on. You don’t need to make your character look this fable to show that there are in and situations this is just ruining the character. It the same way how people didn’t like how ol girl turned out in I will Kill You if You Get Close to My You get Brother manhwa
Read the room
I get that Seme isn’t (fixed a typo)
Idk what I originally typed because I forgot that Mangago redo’s your entire comment if you edit it incorrectly but I had to fix a typo because that one word send someone into a spiral and jumping to conclusions that didn’t even aligned with my point. Anyways——basically my point was that uke is being pathetically weak esp a parent to a little boy and if you’re wishing for him to hurt the seme then you have a better chance of Dan from Jinx cussing MMA boy out before ol boy here in this series.
This has the right amount of horny and good story. I like it. I definitely wouldn’t mind a volume 2/3 from this series. I would also love a spinoff with the younger brother since he has such drastic “on/off” mode like Switch Girl. It would be funny for him to be a puppy/needy too instead of a bottom if a spinoff is made with him esp if his partner is also non human
>>>chapter 17: The champion’s heart stop so they fully/officially (no second chances) declared him the loser. His coach won but the man lost it and he started rambling while having sex with his supposedly dead body. Everyone was gross out even the announcer and people just left. They dumped his body in area where they get rid of bodies and his heart started beating again. The fat rich guy looks at him like a loser and walks away. End
>>>chapter 18 & 19: He begs the fat guy for help probably sayin g he will let him f€ck him but the fat guy looks like he says he can’t get him anymore (basically lost any interest he had with champion). Fast forward you see guy now resorting to taking food from people preferably ladies and eating like a stray animal. The yakuza from chapter 1/2 found him and show him a paper probably stating that he needs to give up some organs to pay off his debt. He doesn’t fight back while on the table and thinking the operation lights reminds of the ring (PTSD) and he goes berserk killing the underground doctors and escaping. While escaping, the fat guy secretary/chauffeur appears and he gets in the car. He is drugged to fall asleep and he wakes up at the fat rich guy’s house. He looks confuse and I’m guessing the fat rich guy tells him you ain’t sh€t and become my onahol£ because that’s all you’re good for and this time you really would end up dead given what he did to the underground doctors.
>>>Chapter 20: He resolves himself and takes off the bloody hospital gown and you see he is fully naked. He begging and flashes back to the fat rich guy and he’s probably talking about how he was disappointed that night on the last fight and him pathetically reaching out his hand asking for one more chance. I guess he says he’ll take care of everything and the Champion appears happy while still begging. But the Fat guy doesn’t like that he still hold some pride in him and steps his foot down on his head and basically says you need to be lower (remember even when he had to suck fat dude’s he still hold some pride). The guy thinks of his wife and kids, he bends down even lower and spreads his cheeks exposing his hole. The fat guy smiles saying (guessing) “good” and big toed his hole for a second. Then he tells the Champion to put his hands in the air and stand against the wall so he can be freaky with him, with shame he does it. He starts licking his nipples, the champion feels arousal looking like he trying to fight his moans and the fat guy is saying something and it seems like it is along the lines of stop fighting you had no pride and maybe can be satisfied by a woman anymore let alone his wife. It seems like the champion admits this and it might be the start to the full-on mind break mode.
>>>chapter 21 for a good minute the guy aggressively fing€ring him and pulling on his nipples and the champion can let down his arms nor stop standing. He gets an ahegao face and the guy says something stuff most likely saying he’s a “b?tch” (the sex on•hole way). The fat guy stops so he doesn’t come and tells the champion to get on the bed. The champion hesitates a little bit and the fat guy smacks him. Basic reminding him to remember his place. The champion gets on the bed and the fat guy grabs him and gives him a deep French kiss much to the dismay of the champion and the fat guy is pulling on his nipples so he can feel pleasure from the kiss. Then the fat guy tells him to get in position. He does and few words exchange while the champion is shivering from fear and shame. Fat guy spreads his cheeks and just as he about to enter him, you (audience) see and he tells the champion he very pearled compared to the last time he saw his “member”(body mod for ). The champion’s doesn’t like that and most likely telling him to stop. The fat guy is spreading him more hurting him and the champion looks like he feeling a mixture between pain and pleasure. The fat guy is smiling and end the chapter with the fat guy pulling his hair hinting to rough/mindbreak sex is about to start.
>>>chapter 22: rough mindbreak sex to the point the champion is barely conscious and ends with the fat guy degrading the champion with his c¥m.
>>>chapter 23: starts off with the champion guy reminiscing about his boxing past and he wakes up from the sex. He regains his composure and thinks that was just a days worth (FROM THIS POINT I’M COMPLETELY GUESSING ON THIS PART UNTIL times pass part anyway~) I think the fat guy either told him that one it’s been years since you been my onahole, two it’s been years and I made sure you can’t go back to your family or finally it’s been years and I’m not helping you, you’re just my hole. What every the fat guy says the champion runs away in shock, the secretary ask should I get him and the fat guy looks like he is saying no since he has no place to go or no his use is done. (Edit: 11/02/2024 after some have corrected me I’m changing the son to uncle and the timeline from 30 years later to 3months—-thx for letting me know guys ) 3months later the mom and son are happy and living in a decent home with the uncle. The mom is about to leave for work and she saying good bye to their her brother in law. The uncle says it right back once she leaves he sees a package. He brings it inside and removes the tape. A flash drive is revealed and the it’s plugged into a laptop. (Kinda like the champion’s coach scene) and in the drive it’s the champion wearing a lace bra fully mind broken and having his pierced nipples pulled while in a gangb€ng. The the uncle is grossed out knowing who it is and what’s on the screen and walks away , opening the door but the video is still playing, he is hearing the champion’s moans and he gets hard, then the door is shut alluding to the fact that he masturbated to his his ex brother-in law THE END
>>>Chapter 24: is the author’s note
He wasn’t able to get off thinking about the prosecutor instead he thought about the gangster I really hope the baby belongs to the gangster and gangster stays a goofy lime green flag(not fully green but not full yellow).
Bruh this is just rape story each character is raping him. There’s no plot, wtf are y’all talking about as in “good story” what story?! And there is 7 more chapters, y’all and the author are getting off r*pe, this isn’t even a good dark BL.
I need them to just sit down and have a real talk, no interruptions. Just lay everything all out even if they don’t have the perfect relationship and even if they don’t stay married but all these walls, miscommunication, bad moves and jumping to conclusions ain’t getting them NOWHERE!
If y'all thought this was going to be a nice story or even a ok “red flag” type of story after seeing the cover art then you was delusional. I know Black Flag BL isn’t everyone’s cup of tea and tbh I have dropped a lot of BF BLs but I at least not delusional when comes to these type of stories and assume it’s going to be anything but ridiculous and be mad at reading the craziness. (I apply this to all Black Flag type of series not just BL but I’m even more realistic when it comes to BF BL/GL).