This has the right amount of horny and good story. I like it. I definitely wouldn’t mind a volume 2/3 from this series. I would also love a spinoff with the younger brother since he has such drastic “on/off” mode like Switch Girl. It would be funny for him to be a puppy/needy too instead of a bottom if a spinoff is made with him esp if his partner is also non human
>>>chapter 17: The champion’s heart stop so they fully/officially (no second chances) declared him the loser. His coach won but the man lost it and he started rambling while having sex with his supposedly dead body. Everyone was gross out even the announcer and people just left. They dumped his body in area where they get rid of bodies and his heart started beating again. The fat rich guy looks at him like a loser and walks away. End
>>>chapter 18 & 19: He begs the fat guy for help probably sayin g he will let him f€ck him but the fat guy looks like he says he can’t get him anymore (basically lost any interest he had with champion). Fast forward you see guy now resorting to taking food from people preferably ladies and eating like a stray animal. The yakuza from chapter 1/2 found him and show him a paper probably stating that he needs to give up some organs to pay off his debt. He doesn’t fight back while on the table and thinking the operation lights reminds of the ring (PTSD) and he goes berserk killing the underground doctors and escaping. While escaping, the fat guy secretary/chauffeur appears and he gets in the car. He is drugged to fall asleep and he wakes up at the fat rich guy’s house. He looks confuse and I’m guessing the fat rich guy tells him you ain’t sh€t and become my onahol£ because that’s all you’re good for and this time you really would end up dead given what he did to the underground doctors.
>>>Chapter 20: He resolves himself and takes off the bloody hospital gown and you see he is fully naked. He begging and flashes back to the fat rich guy and he’s probably talking about how he was disappointed that night on the last fight and him pathetically reaching out his hand asking for one more chance. I guess he says he’ll take care of everything and the Champion appears happy while still begging. But the Fat guy doesn’t like that he still hold some pride in him and steps his foot down on his head and basically says you need to be lower (remember even when he had to suck fat dude’s he still hold some pride). The guy thinks of his wife and kids, he bends down even lower and spreads his cheeks exposing his hole. The fat guy smiles saying (guessing) “good” and big toed his hole for a second. Then he tells the Champion to put his hands in the air and stand against the wall so he can be freaky with him, with shame he does it. He starts licking his nipples, the champion feels arousal looking like he trying to fight his moans and the fat guy is saying something and it seems like it is along the lines of stop fighting you had no pride and maybe can be satisfied by a woman anymore let alone his wife. It seems like the champion admits this and it might be the start to the full-on mind break mode.
>>>chapter 21 for a good minute the guy aggressively fing€ring him and pulling on his nipples and the champion can let down his arms nor stop standing. He gets an ahegao face and the guy says something stuff most likely saying he’s a “b?tch” (the sex on•hole way). The fat guy stops so he doesn’t come and tells the champion to get on the bed. The champion hesitates a little bit and the fat guy smacks him. Basic reminding him to remember his place. The champion gets on the bed and the fat guy grabs him and gives him a deep French kiss much to the dismay of the champion and the fat guy is pulling on his nipples so he can feel pleasure from the kiss. Then the fat guy tells him to get in position. He does and few words exchange while the champion is shivering from fear and shame. Fat guy spreads his cheeks and just as he about to enter him, you (audience) see and he tells the champion he very pearled compared to the last time he saw his “member”(body mod for ). The champion’s doesn’t like that and most likely telling him to stop. The fat guy is spreading him more hurting him and the champion looks like he feeling a mixture between pain and pleasure. The fat guy is smiling and end the chapter with the fat guy pulling his hair hinting to rough/mindbreak sex is about to start.
>>>chapter 22: rough mindbreak sex to the point the champion is barely conscious and ends with the fat guy degrading the champion with his c¥m.
>>>chapter 23: starts off with the champion guy reminiscing about his boxing past and he wakes up from the sex. He regains his composure and thinks that was just a days worth (FROM THIS POINT I’M COMPLETELY GUESSING ON THIS PART UNTIL times pass part anyway~) I think the fat guy either told him that one it’s been years since you been my onahole, two it’s been years and I made sure you can’t go back to your family or finally it’s been years and I’m not helping you, you’re just my hole. What every the fat guy says the champion runs away in shock, the secretary ask should I get him and the fat guy looks like he is saying no since he has no place to go or no his use is done. (Edit: 11/02/2024 after some have corrected me I’m changing the son to uncle and the timeline from 30 years later to 3months—-thx for letting me know guys ) 3months later the mom and son are happy and living in a decent home with the uncle. The mom is about to leave for work and she saying good bye to their her brother in law. The uncle says it right back once she leaves he sees a package. He brings it inside and removes the tape. A flash drive is revealed and the it’s plugged into a laptop. (Kinda like the champion’s coach scene) and in the drive it’s the champion wearing a lace bra fully mind broken and having his pierced nipples pulled while in a gangb€ng. The the uncle is grossed out knowing who it is and what’s on the screen and walks away , opening the door but the video is still playing, he is hearing the champion’s moans and he gets hard, then the door is shut alluding to the fact that he masturbated to his his ex brother-in law THE END
>>>Chapter 24: is the author’s note
He wasn’t able to get off thinking about the prosecutor instead he thought about the gangster I really hope the baby belongs to the gangster and gangster stays a goofy lime green flag(not fully green but not full yellow).
Bruh this is just rape story each character is raping him. There’s no plot, wtf are y’all talking about as in “good story” what story?! And there is 7 more chapters, y’all and the author are getting off r*pe, this isn’t even a good dark BL.
This is not BL omg it's YAOI. Things like this existed before I was even born
BL and yaoi are considered the same it’s mainly the West that puts them into different categories. And I wasn’t saying this is new, I was saying this is just rape with no plot
where do you read the raw?
I didn’t read the raw I saw on bakaupdates that there was 22 chapters + prologue
someone shared the raw in the comments ,and i hate the ending
I need them to just sit down and have a real talk, no interruptions. Just lay everything all out even if they don’t have the perfect relationship and even if they don’t stay married but all these walls, miscommunication, bad moves and jumping to conclusions ain’t getting them NOWHERE!
If y'all thought this was going to be a nice story or even a ok “red flag” type of story after seeing the cover art then you was delusional. I know Black Flag BL isn’t everyone’s cup of tea and tbh I have dropped a lot of BF BLs but I at least not delusional when comes to these type of stories and assume it’s going to be anything but ridiculous and be mad at reading the craziness. (I apply this to all Black Flag type of series not just BL but I’m even more realistic when it comes to BF BL/GL).
I came for the toxicity of the cover, but I was expecting stalker, possessive murderer type of thing, not just a drunk raper...
Tbh that’s different, and I understand being sidelined on that aspect. I’m just talking about the ones who expected this to be a yellow/orange flag (basically not a red flag or even black flag) type of story and being mad that this story is a red/black flag story
LMAO some people just don't really give much attention nothing we can do
When is he just going to have NICE AND CONSENSUAL sex with the other dummy rookie or the chief of police that handed him the secret mission already!!! Like bro is falling for every crook, only one of the crooks sex was “nice” but it falls in the dubious line of sex in mature manga/manhwa sphere
Does anyone know what story that cutie at the bottom of the placeholder is from?
Was thinking the same thing (▰˘◡˘▰)
Don't mind me, just setting a camp here
I just reversed image searched it It’s called “May the Best Brother Win”
You glorious beautiful beast , thank you
Thank you!!
Craziest compliment I’ve ever received ?
at the very bottom? Like the one saying fuck off? If so that guys from a manhwa called Hidden Depths
From a manhua called hidden depth
Your right someone else asked the other day too so I went to go read it. I fell in looooove, Hidden Depths is such a good one and still updating.
Yeahhhh this bad imma keep it on my match list so I can read the last 3-5 chapters. This isn’t good, for the drama, the BDSM nor character development reminds me of the Tiger story
I get that Seme isn’t (fixed a typo)
Idk what I originally typed because I forgot that Mangago redo’s your entire comment if you edit it incorrectly but I had to fix a typo because that one word send someone into a spiral and jumping to conclusions that didn’t even aligned with my point. Anyways——basically my point was that uke is being pathetically weak esp a parent to a little boy and if you’re wishing for him to hurt the seme then you have a better chance of Dan from Jinx cussing MMA boy out before ol boy here in this series.
Oh the seme who had been cheating and manipulating the uke since they 1st met the same seme that forced the uke to have sex through pheromones the same seme who used their son as a pawn to force the uke to stay and pretend to be a family or the seme who told him no I don’t love you or care about you I think your forgetting the whole first half of the book where he used everything in his means to isolate threatened and manipulate the uke like you’re developing some type of sympathy for the seme who doesn’t deserve it what exactly makes the seme a green flag
I think they misspelled, must’ve been “i get that seme isn’t a green flag” because I refuse to believe anyone would think he is a green one lol
Omg for real , where is the sympathy even coming from when he’s a whole red flag the entire time
Yeah I type faster than my thoughts I’m just now noticing the typo.
Yeah I truly hope so because that would be absolute brain rot along with the victim shaming/blaming mentality they got going on
I meant isn’t. And even if that typo wasn’t there the rest of my statement doesn’t even hint to me wanting sympathy for the seme. My point is the uke being extremely pathetic, that this is beyond point of just his character facing obstacles. There are plenty of omegaverses or non omegaverses where the parent has been back into a corner due to the other parent being rich and power but they haven’t been this pathetic. Even if he didn’t trust the seme, and wanted to team up with the father, he didn’t even think of that route he just “whoa is me I’m hopeless” at this point him being this fucking weak mentally as a parent is crap, which is where my frustration lies which you can clearly see typo or not. You completely went a whole different route of what I was saying.
Yeah that’s you putting victims in a box you are victim blaming and shaming when he’s literally going through all the classic trauma and signs of abuse he was forced into isolation the seme literally forced him to quit his job and leave his friends behind taking away his support system and financial freedom as well as abusing his money and status to threaten the ukes friend then uses the uke financial and moral situation to force him to be with him using their literal son as a pawn and his sickness as leverage what parents wouldn’t sacrifice everything and anything so their children would get proper treatment he didn’t have the means to have the medical assistance his son desperately needed so he gave in but then is manipulated emotional/ sexually/ financially to be in a relationship he has to live with the man who is abusing him and make it seem like it’s a happy family for his son like you are inserting other books and expecting a victim to act a certain way to please your own notions is crazy work this is reality for many people people who are abusive know who to abuse and how far they can go they aren’t just oppressing him but his son and are the only ones who can treat his son the have the means in every way Power class status money connections that is a big hurdle when you are going through the mental strife that comes along with abuse you become anxious paranoid you don’t know who to trust you don’t know who’s on their side you’re already isolated and your brain is going to a literal rewiring and chemical change where you switch into survival mode and you are trying to protect your child it’s disgusting to victim blame because they aren’t acting how you want them to victim hood isn’t black and white and they’re so many variables and you are out here sounding exactly like the “why did they stay crowd” shaming and blaming a victim for trying to survive the best they can it takes time to leave and fight back especially when you have a child with the abuser it’s crazy that you don’t see any strength in him as a parent because if he had to sacrifice himself mind-body and soul to get his kid the medical help he needed it then he’s gonna do it And if you see that as pathetic, I think you need to reflect
Lmaooo crazy that me telling you not to victim blame or shame bc they aren’t reacting the way you want isn’t spiraling it gross to be like this person who’s obviously being abused and manipulated isolated from everything he knows can’t stand up for himself like come on he can’t fight against them, power status class money connections not to mention they’re the only ones who could help his son medically that’s a parent, sacrificing his mind-body and soul for his child and like I said, if you don’t see the strength in that, then you need to reflect you’re putting victim hood in the box and it’s not black-and-white and just because some of the acted one way in a different book you expect that to be carried throughout all the victim hood I said that you seem to have more sympathy for the abuser than the abused and that still stands
You are reading a whole different point and maybe you are feeling some type of way because of personal issues, that ain’t got sh*t to do with me nor my point. I gave book examples because yes you can actually write your character badly trying to make them too weak, the same way you can write any character badly in other aspects. If you found my comment sympathizing with seme then your comprehension skills are severely lacking. And at this point you’re running on a tangent that wasn’t even the point to begin with.
I’m not going to keep going back and forth with someone reaching, to different conclusions all because they wanna interpret a whole different viewpoint from what I said verbatim, and yes even with a (singular) typo.
1st your out here making/taking it personal and cussing bc of a discussion The fact that two other also saw it as sympathy towards the seme tells you something if you want to stay in the ignorant side of the conversation that’s fine but you came off as a victim blaming and shaming and having more positive views of the abuser and that’s something you have to live with and yes the singular typo said the seme is a green flag so yes that is misleading so I responded that he isn’t a green flag and I said it seems like ur developing sympathy not that you had and then u went into him going through things being a weak person and bad parent like this isn’t weak this is a literal classic example of abuse it isn’t easy to fight back or leave and it’s never that easy or simple this is the reality for many people not just some plot device you called a abuse victim weak bc they were being manipulated and isolated while being backed into a corner if you think that has nothing to do with it then you lack empathy and emotional maturity but it’s fine not to go back and forth just don’t post on a public discussion board expecting no public discussion I wish you grow from this and have a great life