MiniMean November 3, 2023 5:24 pm

I really enjoyed liking the characters and the story but I felt like this could’ve been at least 15 chapters. Sumito needed to know that Nibi is the crow he saved, the mPreg scenario needed to brought to light and actually fulfilled. I felt like dropping that part of the story, half-hazardly killing off Gaku and just ended it with feather being dropping to have a secret night out is meh. I’m wondering if the author got tired of the story and that’s why it has such a big rushed ending. Compared to the other works this one seems lacking

halfpintty October 20, 2023 6:34 am

I hate when a series is reloaded multiple times. Like yes we get it is a free site doesn’t mean to mess the experience. We was literally 12 (15 -author notes & two specials) from the ending/wrap up s2 so now people have to wait who’re already at chapter 38 for the next uploader to catch up. I feel like a new set of uploads should be done when a) it’s done b) it’s dropped c) it between the 1-20 chapter mark.

This is how alot of series get dropped, rated poorly etc

    Rei October 27, 2023 3:45 am

    I mean if your gonna complain just read in the official site? The author said that people shouldn't upload in illegal sites and alot got scared since they might get sued so they stopped.

    halfpintty October 27, 2023 5:08 pm
    I mean if your gonna complain just read in the official site? The author said that people shouldn't upload in illegal sites and alot got scared since they might get sued so they stopped. Rei

    1) I literally started off saying how I know we get the opportunity to read for free——which acknowledges what type of site this is
    2) Just because we’re using this site doesn’t mean we don’t have the right complain. And the stopped due to the takeover.

    halfpintty October 27, 2023 5:10 pm
    1) I literally started off saying how I know we get the opportunity to read for free——which acknowledges what type of site this is 2) Just because we’re using this site doesn’t mean we don’t have the ... halfpintty

    Since I can’t edit I forgot to add that 3) I do support official site but a lot of my authors are leaving them due to not properly paying them. I know at least four who are getting lawyers involved because it’s really bad

halfpintty October 8, 2023 3:57 pm

This is from MRM but this is one of the few 3P stories where the middle man who usually the uke for two tops(this one is a seke) actually likes them both and it’s not toxic 4/5. I’m only taking one star off because I wish it wasn’t a one shot and an actual story story

    mar_gall October 8, 2023 10:21 pm

    Can you suggest some 3P stories???

MiniMean November 22, 2023 3:05 pm

I first gave this 4 stars since there’s no 3.5 and I felt in the beginning it was more than a 3. But once I saw that it ended and that 4 chapters were side stories, I came back—-I wish I hadn’t and now it’s barely a 2 star.

I felt the story was completely rushed, even if the author wanted a bad ending for Earth Shion and have the uke be happy with Elf Shion. This was rushed way to fast and even the side stories seem half baked as well.


(for those confused) just as the Uke is linked to his parallel world self, so is Earth Shion but the only way Earth shion can visit that world is through sleeping pills and each time he took the pills he was sleeping w/ the Uke. He became attached and finally realized he had feelings for him and shouldn’t have done what he done. That’s why when he forced the uke to do a Bj, he felt bad. This was due to not only realizing his feelings, but as well as past “trauma” of boys gunning for him. Once the uke moved one, it seems like Earth shion not only became addicted to pills, he has also had been molested. I love a bad ending for a bad seme but this wasn’t done right. Ex: Back to School—perfect. I feel like this story could’ve been flushed out more —-at least 10-15 more chapters. Idk what’s happening on Jan 10/20th maybe a second season— idk but this definitely dropped the ball, which is a shame because I truly did like the story and plot building in the beginning.

MiniMean February 19, 2024 4:18 pm

I like it because of the art but like the prequel (but even worse) there are too many plot holes and it felt rushed. Maybe the author wanted to finish this story under 30 chapters, but you can definitely tell that this need at least another 15-20 chapters to flush out the story completely OR at least the “burning questions” plot lines.
- Why does Ian want to punish Angel and why does the mermaid girl hate Angel?
- Why does the big brother disproves of Angel?
- Why did the 2nd brother truly hired someone to tail and take pictures of Herman?
- What did Angel do once he was imprinted?
- What happened to the hunter girl after escaping from her failed attack?

All this could’ve been answered properly if this series was longer. The art kept me going but I felt like the author was trying to end the series do lack of motivation. 3/5 stars

halfpintty September 17, 2023 8:27 pm

I like the art style and storyline so far but OH MY GOD they are HORRIBLE communicators. This one dragged out miscommunication couple arc if I ever read one . Imma let some chapters build before I pick it back up again and hopefully they fix their situation even if they’re at baby steps.

halfpintty September 14, 2023 1:48 pm

I’m so glad the King still went the son wishes but also didn’t allow him the carry the same ill burden like he had to with his son and mother relationship.

halfpintty September 1, 2023 6:48 am

Ok so I read the spoilers and the one comment with spoilers doesn’t explain it well. So basically this is a 3 part series with kinda interchangeable timelines. The first one which the one we’re on now is basically the main Uke was in love w/ the seme & since the seme was with someone else and showed off that love(purposely) the main uke paid group of men to r word the second uke while pregnant & thé he died. The seme vowed for revenge & when the uke was failing financially the seme swooped in took over then r word the uke & he gotten pregnant, took the child & put the main uke in slums. B/c if main uke upbringing he couldn’t cry only smile despite feeling depressed, so he tried to “KIA” himself. The seme didn’t allow it for his revenge b/c he felt he didn’t suffer enough since he is “smiling”, he continues to be mean & r words him popping out 3 more kids who the main uke wasn’t allowed to bond w/. When he had enough ran away, seme followed him saw that he was getting gangR’d, seme ended those Rwords lives and cuddle the uke was basically dying b/c he was pregnant w/ twins of seme & dying. In his dying delirious breathe he apologizes and now knows what 2nd uke went through & begged for forgiveness. The seme felt bad & realized he had feelings for him but couldn’t say ILY even on his grave. The main uke passes and has dream of the 6 kids but not his it’s the 2nd uke alive and well w/ seme and he walks away —the end of story 1, story 2 is them being together but it starts off all complicated & story 3 is seme on The unrequited love end and main uke not feeling in love w/ him. This is an omegaverse dealing w/ experiments and imprinting changing ones sex.

    Nanami’s sugarbaby September 3, 2023 3:51 am

    just one thing: main uke only paid the men to scare him aka rough him up/beat him. He did not want to kill him much less have him die in such a way.

    halfpintty September 4, 2023 3:57 am
    just one thing: main uke only paid the men to scare him aka rough him up/beat him. He did not want to kill him much less have him die in such a way. Nanami’s sugarbaby

    Yeah I noticed that after I posted I wish I could edit this since there some bits I want to clean up even if it is a rough synopsis/spoiler

    Nanami’s sugarbaby September 5, 2023 9:40 pm

    NO WORRIES! ur summary is quite good :D

halfpintty July 27, 2023 2:59 am

Too many of y’all are on the side of cheating wife like she is not at fault as well, just tells me that y’all would rather sleep your way into another relationship instead of properly talking or either leaving then relationship. The couple has communication problems and instead of really being honest with each other one is sleeping around and cheating while the other is being closed off. Idk if this story only has 48 chapters or if it’s still continuing but I’ll wait until the last 4 are uploaded.

halfpintty July 10, 2021 1:02 pm

Tbh I didn’t like none of the stories but everyone is hating on chapter 5 and I’m stuck here confused. They meet up after a traumatic split and they just simply go out?! I’m so confused

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