Mokha June 4, 2021 1:35 pm

So far the story line and the world building actually really good, MC really focusing on building his kingdom, than collecting women like pokemon, and the alternative storyline of popular myth story really interesting, as we know in the original journey to the west, almost all the dragon clan was painted as a overly proud clan and sometime villainous but in here we can see what if the dragon clan actually just want to protect themselves, so its quite interesting, i just wish the chapter was longer tho and more update, hha

Mokha May 30, 2021 1:31 pm

The author likely hate the mc lol, each day they make the mc puking blood and get beaten, and then the mc not even try to explain himself instead keep being emo for 50 chapters hahah

Mokha May 28, 2021 1:49 am

I get excited whenever there will be an expedition or a battle, but sadly almost everyone of it ended up super quick haha, art and plot actually quite good and interesting, but tbh the armor and weapon design kinda hmmn childish? Or over the top, which is look kinda impractical and the only thing that kinda annoy me the mc focusing more on money in the early story, which is makes me tired to saw a number and number again as the resolution.

    Panda-chan May 31, 2021 1:48 am

    Yes I agree. The reason it's over the top tho is because all the armor and weapons are from a video game..soooo nothing is actually accurate in ways of fighting and armor. Lol. That's the fun part

Mokha May 28, 2021 12:04 am

Why theres shoujo on the genre list? Shoujo is a genre when the protagonist have to be a Girls, and usually it will include romance as well, if the protagonist is a young male the correct genre should be shounen.

    Yolo July 5, 2021 11:36 am

    I could be totally wrong but shojo is MEANT for girls but it doesn't always have to be about a girl protagonist falling in love (●'β—‘'●)οΎ‰

    Mokha July 18, 2021 5:57 am

    shoujo usually have female Mc, sailormoon, CCs,etc were the prime example for shoujo, shounen will always have male Mc, even if it's telling a story about slice of life or romance from male perspective.

    Haechanahceah September 5, 2023 7:54 am
    shoujo usually have female Mc, sailormoon, CCs,etc were the prime example for shoujo, shounen will always have male Mc, even if it's telling a story about slice of life or romance from male perspective. Mokha

    Lol there's shoujo like natsume's book of friends, gakuen babysitters, banana fish, nijiro days exists which have male protagonists. Shoujo just means 'for girls' the protagonists def can be a male

    kukuruyuk December 21, 2023 9:45 pm
    shoujo usually have female Mc, sailormoon, CCs,etc were the prime example for shoujo, shounen will always have male Mc, even if it's telling a story about slice of life or romance from male perspective. Mokha

    Nope shoujo doesn't have to be female MC, it's just a genre of story that meant for young girls

    Yolo December 21, 2023 10:12 pm
    Lol there's shoujo like natsume's book of friends, gakuen babysitters, banana fish, nijiro days exists which have male protagonists. Shoujo just means 'for girls' the protagonists def can be a male Haechanahceah

    BANANA FISH ?

    Haechanahceah December 24, 2023 6:56 pm
    BANANA FISH ? Yolo

    Yeah?

Mokha May 27, 2021 11:59 pm

I think Mc to focus on the "original game" goals, and too meddlesome on their business, dont get me wrong, i like the current progress, but isnt his original goal to avoid being Poor, and ended like the original game ending? He knew his fall will be his relationship with eliza, if it was me the first thing i do is to have no relationship with her, and then about iris and the prince, the plot already decided for them, it best to leave it as it is, no need to include himself on their business, it kinda become messed up, if it was me, i will focus on developing my area, theres so many girls in academy no need to focus on eliza who will be become his downfall, he can choose so many alternative routes but why choosing the same end goals?

    Kirgya June 23, 2021 2:31 pm

    Probably because he clearly likes Eliza even in his past life, it's just not explained thoroughly in the plot, is what I think personally...

Mokha May 27, 2021 11:56 am

Arts, and panel actually really good, story wise can't judge yet, but i still dont understand why the author love adding useless girls into the story? Except for thr sister who actually important for the plot, but the princess? A deadweight for sure, this is why for cultivation story i prefer mc fall in love with another strong cultivator, not just a weak girl who will become mc weakness in the future, and tbh people who usually focusing on cultivation routes usually never bother with romance, classic story etc never have a famous cultivator with harem, usually they comminted to their wife or husband, but i dont know why author loves adding harem into a cultivator story, nice art and story already plenty of fan service for readers, no need harem for fan service which already overused and old.

Mokha May 25, 2021 10:00 am

He said he was a good gamer, when you thrown into a world like this, the first thing he should do is grinding, grinding to improve your power, learn more about the game mechanic (which is his system book) instead arguing with it, the book called itself a system not a quest log, he actually got all the information on his hand

Mokha May 25, 2021 8:16 am

The world building actually really massive, the plot and the character actually really charming, this is i think the first time i like all characters equally, usually theres must be one character who always gets my nerves hahah

Mokha May 25, 2021 12:36 am

Now i remembered why I'm droping this series.

    Buney June 14, 2021 12:10 pm

    Would you share the reason why cause right now I'm in a dilemma of whether is should read it or not.

Mokha May 24, 2021 7:38 am

Oh god, the more chapter i read the more intense the cringe effect i got to the point i have a migraine, at first i thought i will have somethig to read, since it has a lot of chapters, but no, dont waste your time with this cringe inducing fan service incels manhua, save your time for other.

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