I get excited whenever there will be an expedition or a battle, but sadly almost everyone of it ended up super quick haha, art and plot actually quite good and interesting, but tbh the armor and weapon design kinda hmmn childish? Or over the top, which is look kinda impractical and the only thing that kinda annoy me the mc focusing more on money in the early story, which is makes me tired to saw a number and number again as the resolution.
I think Mc to focus on the "original game" goals, and too meddlesome on their business, dont get me wrong, i like the current progress, but isnt his original goal to avoid being Poor, and ended like the original game ending? He knew his fall will be his relationship with eliza, if it was me the first thing i do is to have no relationship with her, and then about iris and the prince, the plot already decided for them, it best to leave it as it is, no need to include himself on their business, it kinda become messed up, if it was me, i will focus on developing my area, theres so many girls in academy no need to focus on eliza who will be become his downfall, he can choose so many alternative routes but why choosing the same end goals?
Arts, and panel actually really good, story wise can't judge yet, but i still dont understand why the author love adding useless girls into the story? Except for thr sister who actually important for the plot, but the princess? A deadweight for sure, this is why for cultivation story i prefer mc fall in love with another strong cultivator, not just a weak girl who will become mc weakness in the future, and tbh people who usually focusing on cultivation routes usually never bother with romance, classic story etc never have a famous cultivator with harem, usually they comminted to their wife or husband, but i dont know why author loves adding harem into a cultivator story, nice art and story already plenty of fan service for readers, no need harem for fan service which already overused and old.
He said he was a good gamer, when you thrown into a world like this, the first thing he should do is grinding, grinding to improve your power, learn more about the game mechanic (which is his system book) instead arguing with it, the book called itself a system not a quest log, he actually got all the information on his hand
So far the story line and the world building actually really good, MC really focusing on building his kingdom, than collecting women like pokemon, and the alternative storyline of popular myth story really interesting, as we know in the original journey to the west, almost all the dragon clan was painted as a overly proud clan and sometime villainous but in here we can see what if the dragon clan actually just want to protect themselves, so its quite interesting, i just wish the chapter was longer tho and more update, hha