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Is this a sad/bittersweet ending?

I'm ngl this was a lil hard to get through do to the amount SA/rape/pedophilia. MC did what needed to be done. It was crazy how the story unraveled. I was okay she gonna get revenge on this dude but it ended up being a whole thing. It was so insane that proud kidnapped the lil princess and held her hostage for 20 yrs. I didnt peep it until they were on his way to his mansion that i was like oh shit. I like how at the end she got her revenge just how she wanted and didn't get side tracked with "love". Honestly Blanie was the best for her they had this understanding of one another. I found it kinda funny how she thought if had known who she was originally that they would make him lose interest like girl u murder ex fiance, got of rid of lady because she was a bitch, and killed ur dad, and if it came to it would kill her lil bro(tho I think she finds the lil guy cute) and Blaine would stand beside her and let her do her thing. Now van on the other side yes he was nice, yes he was kind, yes she did find him more attractive then Blaine. But he only loved her because she was "different" then other girls. She was this kind strong inteligente women in his eyes. He fell in love with the mask she curated specifically to make him fall. Had she been herself from the get go he wouldn't have fallen for her. If anything he would have been repulsed. I think van deserves someone more honest and genuine. Honestly he was just being a lustful dog. Then to say u truly love her but the sec u have a chance u "steal" her from Blaine acting as if she didn't fully make the choice to be with him and not u? In the sides it seemed as tho she just went along with him. With Blaine it was a lil more complex. And I do believe she loves Blaine in her own twisted way "even if our love fades and we ended up killing eachother that would be fun as well" she so crazy I love her. A decent story.

MC reaction is valid like he said it do be the one bringing flowers home every day that be cheating (ik we know he not but MC doesnt and ML is somewhat acting suspicious). Honestly I'm down to see him get possessive because gah damn it's is crazy how obsessive ML is like homie can't even hangout with his friends without the dude getting upset. Just my personal opinion I kinda don't like how the story progressed I feel like the MC isn't as masculine as he initially was at the beginning they him more like small/fem and his character is just him going along with ML. Also him being like my bf so sweet for letting me hangout with my friend is crazy?? I mean overall it's good story just kinda got a bit boring

Jigu so godamn funny like haahahhahahahahhahahahaha I can't he so funny

I'm in to deep to drop all I can do is laugh

What's the age gap?

99% rape 1% plot bro this is actually sad
It went SA>Consent>SA>consent>Coerced>Gang rape> Happy ending?
Mc & ml deserved better
Also the brothers like wtf they fucked that's actually insane

It's ight..

Felt like it was more smut then it was plot