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Lemme see your work

good try

?? Lmao by this response then it’s easy to assume you don’t have any! So sybau

ion have to have good work to see something is hot garbage lool

Actually you kinda do! Your criticism is ass move around

not evb has to like this corny ass porn like u

That true but it would’ve been better if you just fucked off instead of commenting something so mouth-breathingly stupid. Lame ass(≧∀≦)

stupid yet u could’ve also jus downvoted and scrolled

Oh look at that. I’m a nuisance to you like your comment is a nuisance to others. Oh how the world works

trust me nb cares that much

I absolutely get why you’d react like that but it absolutely makes no sense, because by your arugumentation nobody has the right to comment/criticize anything regarding topics they themselfs haven’t created. So you wouldn’t be able to criticize music, art, literature, movies, food (excepts ur a Chef) ect. Etc. yk :D also it is absolutely obvious that this is pure smut created for horny kinky fks so its not that deep it really has no story at all which is not bad because it meant to be a smut full short-story so it fulfilled it purpose. I don’t get neither you for defending it so erneastly as if we’re talking about Kafka or Shakespeare. Neither the other for asking if it is a middle schooler who wrote this while reading literally smut ? Like what did u expect? A 10/10 Novel with the craziest Plot and side characters with enourmous backstory and material, its a p0rn short story mguy.

said that cus the writing sucked btw not bc i actually thought a ms wrote it. ik it’s just smut doesn’t mean i can’t hate on it tho

Valid