I don't want to be too much of a complainer cause I know how hard it can be to write an novel and explain every well, but...
They completely time skipped so many events. While some of the conversation have always been 2 dimensional and awkward I didn't mind as long as the pacing was good. Everything just seems rushed now. Like what happened to the brother per say. Yes, I know he is dead but did he get a " good" burial or was his body thrown in an unmasked grave for being a traitor. The queens coronation. His best friends death was anticlimactic but did the others ever find out he was a traitor working for the demon queen? Did other opinion of him change after that? I think the ml going to see the mc could have been handled better. Like he feels so guilty he killed his friends and wants help, the mc tried to support him, one things leads to another and they get it on.... Rather than him killing his friend and going straight to having sex like killing his friend meant nothing.
I guess for me so much of the wedding was anticlimactic as it was barely talked about again. It's been a bit rushed since then that the story isn't as satisfying to read anymore compared to the first 40 ish chapters
I just hope the place he moves to thrives and his former country crumbs into despair untill they realize the severity for chasing him out.
I doubt it happens, but in my mind I keep thinking of all six children meeting up. With the eldest catching his sibling up to his new life and introducing himself as Aeroc instead of Rapiel.
I come back and re read the whole story ever few weeks and this little idea gives me some peace of mind for the children and Aeroc.
