I've run through all 25 chapters and it seems pretty good so far I'll say it the one issue I have is that the MC is almost dangerously naive Like so far he's lucky but yeah
Am I losing my mind or is there a chapter miss in here. Every time I try to go to the next chapter from chapter 2 it takes me to the URL for chapter 3
I gave it an attempt but this type of harem needs the mc to be very charismatic and he is not. In fact he's so clumsy that the fact he's not going to be killed by these ladies before the opening scene happens shocks me. Also I'm not entirely sure he's intelligent to pull off the schemes He plans.
I'm just glad I'm not the only one getting exhausted by how stupid the both of them are
I think I'm going to sit on this for a little while I read the first chapter and it seems really really interesting but given the first chapter I'm a little worried about the level of tragedy that might be involved in this story so I'm going to let this marinate
Is this another one of those stories where the female lead is determined that the book is the only way that this can end even considering the fact that she was literally reading a book that had someone who regressed into the novel that changed the outcome of story because of the regression
So I got to chapter 20. I think I'm going to stop here. The FLis so unpleasant to me personality wise. She's taken the whole I don't think the book will change to an extent in which is making her feel more manipulative and cruel than this supposed villain character is
I can't exactly put my finger on it but the dialogue is bothering the hell out
Is it just me or are there faces getting rounder as time goes on I swear the art in the last chapter wasn't this chubby
I also noticed it, I was so confused while reading cause I thought my eyes were bad
The art definitely changed. Not only are their faces wider, their eyes are smaller/narrow. The proportions are off now
It's giving three year old child
Man I try to give this a chance but honestly by chapter 32 I wasn't really interested anymore and the way it read that would have been a great place for a season stopper anyways so I'm just going to pretend that's where the story ended and I think I'm going to be done
Isn't this just an alternative universe version of scum villain self-saving system. Like we got the young demon disciple raised by his cold master who grows up to abuse/torture his master, who was disliked by his fellow disciples, who went on a mission and got a dangerous sword and all that in the first 10 chapters