I really love the overall idea of this story but I really wish the female lead's character was a done better. I love that she's the dominant one in the relationship but the way she treats the bf is really disappointing. Normally I wouldn't really mention something like this (because I've seen much worse) but since there's so few stories with a dominant girl and submissive guy I'd just really like to see it done right for once.
I've said it before and I'll say it Again I love this dynamic so much more than the original story. I also think the two characters show more personality and are overall just much more interesting than before.