any smut scenes that heavily rely on quoted moans: "ah, ah..... AHHHHH!" or "hnnggg I'M COMINGGGGGG" or "oh god, oh go-ahh, yes, yes, right there omg hng, ah-ah-ahhh" like damn man.. just describe it in one line, no need to quote the moans too. fuck that shit is embarrassing to read.
2025-02-15 08:28 marked
awful lines in fics youve read