rinoa777

the character's behaviors change quick in so little time. top looks caring despite being clear he's a rapist that kills his victims, and bottom looks stubborn and not weak to not give in into an abuser's touch... idk. feels like "development" is making the characters move faster than it should, making us see another face of the main characters that should be in much later chapters

i dont see the point of making the MC finally leave for then make him return one chapter after. then dont make him leave in the first place bc that just doesnt give us any impact, it's irritating and boring imo