Everything is rushed and it feels off. This also kinda reminds me of one of those corny mafia Wattpad thingamabobs written by 12 year olds that also make attempts to draw their characters out except the art is actually pretty good. There is no way this is gonna go on for over 30 chaps at best bc of how fast the story is moving and we barely know anything about the characters, but idk. Maybe a lot of us are used to slow moving plots, or maybe it’s just that the creator sucks at adding in some background info and coming up with characters that aren’t bland
Also why tf would he tickle his pickle right next to his little brother? You cannot be serious.
Everything is rushed and it feels off. This also kinda reminds me of one of those corny mafia Wattpad thingamabobs written by 12 year olds that also make attempts to draw their characters out except the art is actually pretty good. There is no way this is gonna go on for over 30 chaps at best bc of how fast the story is moving and we barely know anything about the characters, but idk. Maybe a lot of us are used to slow moving plots, or maybe it’s just that the creator sucks at adding in some background info and coming up with characters that aren’t bland
Also why tf would he tickle his pickle right next to his little brother? You cannot be serious.