
Ngl Idm Suzy or any of the girls that much but hate how much the girls are involved in it with their crushes instead of fighting. Maybe it’s a me problem bc I just don’t like it when romance and action mix unless the creator can actually pull it off/it really fits the plot. I wanna at least see more of the girls throwing hands if they’re gonna be getting that much screen time.
Also no hate to the art style, but the girls all look the same with a couple diff facial features and hairstyles. The only girl who’s name and character design I can actually remember is Suzy because she’s pretty included, but that’s it.

Yeah i agree with you. That if they are going to include romance they should now how to pull it off.
In particular i dont like the fact that girld are being involved and all they do is actually get in the way, like how suzy nearly got kidnapped . If they are going to involve girls who cant fight, which is notmal since girls do have a weaker body construction that isnt suited for fighting, they should at least make them smart, since girls CaN actually be smart sometimes more then men when it comes to these types of things. The girls should know how to navigate these situations especially Suzy who seems to have grown up waching her brother fight and seems to know some martial arts too, she seems too oblivious to everything that is happening. Aperantly she was raised with no parents and a brother who had to fight to make money.

Everything is rushed and it feels off. This also kinda reminds me of one of those corny mafia Wattpad thingamabobs written by 12 year olds that also make attempts to draw their characters out except the art is actually pretty good. There is no way this is gonna go on for over 30 chaps at best bc of how fast the story is moving and we barely know anything about the characters, but idk. Maybe a lot of us are used to slow moving plots, or maybe it’s just that the creator sucks at adding in some background info and coming up with characters that aren’t bland
Also why tf would he tickle his pickle right next to his little brother? You cannot be serious.
W Ijin