Hope this one is a bit cleaner to understand. Let me know if you have any notes for me.
I can't believe I missed that!! Thank you!! Yes, Raman's last name would have been Genista unless his mother wanted to distance herself from the royal family, she might have given him both or only his father's name. If Kinard is successful and crowns Raman as the new Emperor, then Raman might take on the Genista name. (But I'd prefer Devon to be the new Esland ruler, she understands the people and noble politics better. Raman's trauma makes him have an avoidant personality. Looking forward to see if he changes.)
Hello everyone. We’ve made it to chapter 100!! As a special gift, I finally made a character list/ map to make this series easier to digest. Let me know if you have questions, concerns, or comments. I will most likely have to fix or add certain things as the series progresses. Should I add ages too?? Enjoy~
Thank you for taking the time to make these notes! I strive to improve.
I made the cousin line because most of the audience isn’t aware of the family relationship between certain characters. Such as Dr. Caleb being related to Prince Raman. I didn’t have a line pointed between Durant and Owen and I still got several questions if they are related. People of many other languages do read the scans so I try not to leave anything out, to be solved through context clues. It’s already tough enough to have things translated from English to their native languages.
The enemy line is a separate map? Like a separate map for only friends vs enemies? I do see that the map is congested. It is a network of people-heavy series. Would making two different maps would confuse people…. Would making the enemy’s line a maroon or deeper red on the same map help, maybe?
Thank you in advance!
Kinard children? I am unsure what this means. If you are talking about the two people below Kinard's photo on the line map, those are his parents. Blue means marriage partners and purple line means their children. I had to place his parents downwards because of the spacing. But I'd be happy to answer any questions.
Hello Everyone, I would like to apologize that the majority of the quality of the images will not be the best. I have tried to find the clearest images possible but was unsuccessful. Secondly, I just uploaded a new image editing program and there will be some changes to how I’ll edit my scans. I’m still new to this and self-taught. Any advice is appreciated! Let me know if there are any concerns I can address. Also if the speech is a bit off, I was watching Game of Thrones at one point and my brain was converting everything into similar phrasing. Chapter 7 will be uploaded in two weeks. THANKS FOR READING~!
How’s the SFX in this chapter? I think this is much better than the previous chapter. After the font change. Is the lowercase for the inner thoughts okay? Or does it feel a bit off since everything else is capitalized? Thoughts?
Side rant: My brother came into my room to ask me what kinda boba tea I wanted, while I was adding some sfx and it had to be the scenes of Yesing and Raman making out naked in the bathtub…. And he almost knocked my laptop to the ground. I’m going to believe he didn’t see anything and was just being a klutzy like always, and not utterly shocked at my hobby. Worse of all my drink came without boba! I am the victim of the most heinous crime in society! I will seek vengeance for this wrongdoing. (I’m kidding they gave me two free drink coupons. Support small businesses!)
Hello, I started using a new photo editing program called Krita. If you have any suggestions or find any issues with the new edits, let me know. Should I keep the translated sfx on the side? Or is it too distracting? I’m looking at different fonts too. I just downloaded this program a few days ago so I’m still playing around with it. I appreciate y’all patience and any advice.
Hello, thank you to everyone who wished me a speedy recovery. I was able to recuperate within two days of the procedure and feel energized. Especially enough to work on this chapter and some additions. I created a character map and list to help with digesting the chapters more easily. Please let me know if you have any suggestions or see any issues. Season two has just begun to release. The chapters seem to be coming out in halves and once every other month. I will be working on season two the following week after chapter 7.5 comes out next week. I look forward to seeing you all in two weeks for season two.
Also thank you for the birthday wishes!
Thank you for the wait! Please let me know if there are any issues. I'll hope to have chapter 9 be released in the next two weeks. I appreciate your support! I'm thinking of updating the character map to something different by then.
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