beta
these new chapters are probably the best the story's ever had, it was becoming vinegar, but right now it's on the tracks to be wine.
Jaekyung has more depth in 1 chapter than in the last 50 or so, it's insane the jump in quality that happened.
I find it interesting that even the panelling changed, there is much more transitional panels with actions that might have been considered "unescessary" sometime ago, yet this change of pace with very intropesctive approach makes them believable, we are dealing with characters with much deeper real human reactions, and so it fits very well.
I do find however that jaekyung's ghost was a bit cheesy, it's an overused metaphor and it could have much more personality, its appearance etc. I know we are repeating the BJ arc, yet this feels fresh (maybe because it's been sometime since i read the latter? might be so).
I would the story to take this approachfrom now - however, I'm no writer- it'd be an interesting twist getting the redemption arc (read Jaekyung getting what he deserves), but instead of just "I've been rejected and now I value the one that values me", a long psychological journey in which we see all through his eyes, and finally deciding by himself and not others judgement to be a better person for Dan.
I'd like to get a total focus on his psyche, but let's see how it goes, I'm happy as long as it's fun.