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This is really good, i enjoyed their relationship very much.
Idk where this line is, but it exists, the one that separates cute guys from overly girly (in the sense that they are basically women with penises, and the author avoids any kind of masculinity that any man will eventually experience, esteriotypically manly that is), and Ubuki is on the side i consider better, so there was no moment i felt like he lacked knowlodge of being man, as happens by consequence of almost all BL writers being female.
solid, i don't think i dislike much about it
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the translation and image quality are not the best, but i really appreciate the effort, i couldn't find a raw, and this is more fun than going through a dic.
it's a one shot, that was clearly not intended to be a one shot, so much of it seems to have been in the author's mind, and didn't come out.
as a self-standing work this is not really that good, it's rushed, but seeing as this is probably not what was primarily thought (or so i think), it's enjoyable.
there is thing with yaoi that characters, especially the uke, becomes way too cute, in a way that sex scenes are always sitting in an injuction with me, and this happened
it's getting nowhere