beta
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Poor Writing.
ML's action was super inconsistent. The reasoning they gave for his indifference and annoyance for MC was not answered. He said MC wasn't cute in others' perspective, but for him it's cute. He didn't like MC having other friends but then he goes and be friends with someone MC is clearly insecure with (Aoi or wtvr his name is). The ML is just a walking red flag, who let's his friends talk bad about his supposed "beloved". Yet he can't seem to be happy when MC has someone close to him other then ML himself. Possessive ML in the red flag way. Not in the "ooohh that's hot" way. I wish the ending wasn't them, because you can already see so many problems in their relationship. This is the type of relationship that, jf they don't change, would be so fucking toxic that I'd grow white hair from reading their toxic situations and problems.
Overall a solid 2/10
The art style was good, I can easily understand the story.
But plot wise I hate it that's all.