Listen, I'm not an artist or something, but I just think this chapter is too flat or plain tbh, like I'm not judging (fr) but I just think its flat, like this was made with just base color or sum. I think it should have more deep shadows and contrast. Even the light wasn't that visible, like if you're in a dark place and there's a light source, the light will be surely really an eye sore, what I mean is really noticeable. But I love it anyway and I'm not artist:D
Can someone please give me a story similar to this if there are?
There's no Way I'm the protagonist