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Well, it would have been a good story, if it weren't for chapter 88....
for me, I hated the whole story after it, and I didn't want to continue, there was no need for a scene like that...
This was just to torture Ivan... It wasn't necessary in my opinion, just annoying...
what would a scene like that add, it just made me feel so upset, I don't know, I just hated the story because of it..