beta
Literally nothing to even critique or like here cause it's basically unfinished, very sloppy writing. It has the setup for a 40+ chapter story, but just randomly ends. I only enjoy the art style (especially the alpha's looks). The alpha and beta just randomly grow super close and like each other, despite the fact there are no pheromones to bond them that quickly - plot is missing!
Sure, the dominant alpha likes Inseo's smell, but this isn't the crazy types of pheromone infatuation. It doesn't make sense, it's rushed and sadly, its potential is completely lost. It wasn't even cute, just rushed.