Yeah, he's also an animal person (his teeth were suspiciously sharp from the start), but it's kinda disappointing tbh. I wish he was a human who had to deal with having an animalistic wolf type of partner. Their strength difference alone was so sexy, as well as the need for Kamiya to restrain himself as to not injure the bottom. Now that tension is kinda gone... Super sexy nonetheless and well, a lil mpreg doesn't hurt either lol
well with the way kamiyas obsession was growing i think we’d have a lump of flesh that is the remains of hitomi by the time the story ends so im actually glad he turned into an infectee too, he can understand kamiyas obsession himself now on that instinctual level
Lump of flesh fr fr
That's a good point lol
Cute story overall and lovely art style. I loved the aspect of the top reading the bottom's thoughts just during sex as they're super intimate in this moment - even mentally. I do think their relationship was very rushed, but I guess when it's a rather short story like that, this can't be avoided. I would've loved to see more of how their awkward relationship progressed from a friendship to a crush, then to a romantic one.
The sex scenes here are so sterile I find myself skipping them. Maybe it has to do with the art style but they lack intimacy and tension imo. There's no soul in those characters as their expressions are empty somehow. Too pretty and perfected in a way, it's not raw enough.
The story is fine, but forgettable
Agree honestly- the story seemed to drag on unnecessarily. Tbh I only liked the 2nd ml
Literally nothing to even critique or like here cause it's basically unfinished, very sloppy writing. It has the setup for a 40+ chapter story, but just randomly ends. I only enjoy the art style (especially the alpha's looks). The alpha and beta just randomly grow super close and like each other, despite the fact there are no pheromones to bond them that quickly - plot is missing!
Sure, the dominant alpha likes Inseo's smell, but this isn't the crazy types of pheromone infatuation. It doesn't make sense, it's rushed and sadly, its potential is completely lost. It wasn't even cute, just rushed.
I think the idea of defying destiny is quite interesting in an omegaverse setting and romantic, too. However, to really make it convincing, Miuyauchi could've not had the kid (as far as I'm concerned, betas can't have children in the first place. It's fiction, I know, and rules can be altered to the storyline, but with particularly a storyline like fighting destiny and rigidity, leaving the rigid rules in place would've made more sense for the impact of the story), and his love for Kudou would have still been purely out of choice for each other, without a fated bond, or a child keeping them especially bonded. I liked the idea of Miuyauchi craving a child and working through accepting his fate together with his super loyal, devoted Kudou. It would've made the story so believable. The first couple was forgettable, but I guess they were needed to introduce to us the actual main couple, even if set up as a 'secondary' butler couple.
Overall, some cool lines, interesting concept, however, at times, very confusing panels, family relationships, and inconsistencies with the baseline of the story - defying or accepting destiny.
But Miya did tell his son that even tho he's in the world now, Papa(kudo) belongs to mama(miya) first. So I think what you're talking about, is already a part of the story. I think at least lol.
Finally, fucking finally a non toxic, actually caring, actually expressing emotions type of alpha who's not a deranged robot, an untouchable perfect prince or a pervy, rape-y psychopath. Alpha seems like an actual human being and is SUCH A GOOD BOYFRIEND (he sets the bar where it should bem.. Oh boy, he does). Definetly happy to read this, it's a refreshing dynamic in omegaverse
Also, he's soooooo fine ugh
I find myself always returning to this story. Love the angst, the sexual tension, the toxicity. The mentally fucked up main character just adds to the whole authenticity of the story. It's like super believable and organic. I really wish to see it continue tbh.
This must be the hottest yaoi I've ever read, the tensiiooonnnnnn. Can't wait for the next chapter
Bruh, this plot is so boring and the way they fall for each other is so rushed and I can't be bothered to even read if there's any past background/meeting that makes Dean fall for Craig so quickly... What an underwhelming read, dropping it
real. How do you fall for someone that potentially murdered someone dumbass shit.
Yeah, the bar for plot quality in yaoi is so low because of stories like this one
It was really shit tbh
There's not. No past history to fall in love with each other
Bro is clinging onto Hitomi like his life depends on it, despite knowing it's not the best for him to stay together. I'm guessing he can't help it as he's already formed a bond with H. It's kinda tragic in a way. I guess they'll cure their loneliness for each other, which screams veeery codependent as someone else said here, but due to their conditions, they kinda can't help it- it's their nature now. Poor Kiyama, he knows what he desires destroys the subject of his desire, Hitomi, but also can't live without him. Ah, their fucks are going to be insanely passionate CAN'T WAIT
*Kamiya, lol