KomaHinaaa Doujiiiin! It's been a while omg!
You see, I actually started to read yaoi because I was (and still am) a big fan of this ship. I'm actually really surprised that I have never saw this doujin about them before, because I'm really a hardcore fan.
So what do I think about this? Mmh... The problem when you are a big fan of Dangan Ronpa and of the KomaHina/HinaKoma ship, is that you know the characters too well.
The thing is that I don't think that Hinata would really have acted like this...? I mean he would have been really angry at Komaeda, but raping him... No. Even if Komaeda is a slave in the AU I don't think he would do that. But I'm kind of used to this... The personality of Hajime is almost never (I said almost, not absolutly never) well respected in thoses dounjins, which is a shame.
For Komaeda, it was okay, he really is like this after all. He really thinks he is trash and also looked down to Hinata in the game when he learnt that he was not a symbol of hope.
I think the major problem of this story is that it was too fast actually, and it ended in a brutal way, with a really sad ending...
Even if it was sad the smut part was really sexy (I meaaaan after all, Komaeda as a uke really is something♡). But like the rest of the story it was waaay to short... :(
And we will probably never get a next part (except if it already exist somewhere else, but it is marked as completed sooo) because in this doujin Hinata is wearing the brown uniform from hope's peak: however in 2016, when dr3 came out we saw that unlike hope's peak academy students he has a black uniform. So this doujin must be kind of old I guess.
So yeah, I think the doujin was good and had potential, I actually kinda liked the begining but I feel like the ending was rushed.
It still felt good to read a komahina doujin I didn't know... It's been a while ♡ (:
Btw, if you don't know Dangan ronpa, where thoses characters are from, you should give it a try!
Dangan ronpa is actually a serie of games. You can watch the first season (the first game) easily because it was adapted as an anime. However Komaeda and Hinata are from the second game which doesn't have an anime. There's also lots of more things but this is kind of long to explain and I'm pretty sure nobody actually care lol sry I like Dangan Ronpa so much
Bye bye! ♡
(DR2 is best season/game, Komaeda is best boy, Chiaki is best girl and KomaHina is best ship. Of all games, including V3. You can't change my mind. Love ya ♡)
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true, but considering a big chunk of komahina dj's are like this, it's not really surprising how the story developed into this. many dj's (not just in dr) have the characters be ooc, if but slightly, especially if it's to drive the smut/plot forward.
in this case, hajime had to 'break' because komaeda felt betrayed and changed his temperament towards him (even more or less mocking him and disregarding all the moments they shared together). it's similar to what happened in 2-4 but only if komahina had a more intimate relationship.
YES
FINALLY SOME CHARADEV AND REDEMPTION
But the fact that the flashback is happening in the middle of a fight... is scaring me... ( T﹏T )