This already has more chapters in another site with the same uploader and I must say, this is pure gold. The relationship dynamics, the chemistry, the plot, the angsts, chef's kiss! I love stories like this sm, I'm also waiting for the dawn of the dragon's upload so I'll sit still for now until these two are done.
This just gave me eternal happiness. THEYRE SOOO CUUUUUTEEE!!! i'm gonna hurl, I feel extremely jealous whenever I see them getting cute with each other. You can give me a full 3 chapter full smut, I won't budge, but give me a single frame of them being so lovely and sweet and soft, I'll twitch and turn and squeak like a goddamn highschooler with a crush.
ANYWAY!! The plot is so solid, I keep getting invested. And I love the fact that they utilized characters well to make the plot and storytelling more solid. 10/10 would love to reread this again in the near future. *Sighs* look at these 2 lonely humans finding solace in each other's arms *sighs one more time*
PS: kitten goongbaek is so damn adorable, he just looks like my little kitty
It's not that bad come on! It wasn't the best but to say this is trash is too farfetched. The characters' decisions were driven by their situations. Jiwook has been living his life of having no choice hence why he always felt cagey and defensive whenever sung eon does what he wants to him without taking his feelings into consideration. I don't like jiwook either from his notorious bad decisions one after another but if you know how to look at the character and analyze them, you would actually understand. I even hate his inferiority complex that made sung eon suffer so much for the longest time and how he just judged him for being an elite and acting like an elite, but this guy has been surviving allthrough his life. He is piss poor I bet he even barely eats. I think anybody can develop even just a slightly bit of jealousy if they're in his situation (which gave sung eon's line of "feeling angry at something also takes a lot of energy" more impact to his pride)
Sung eon isn't the best as well. But goddamn no one ever taught this guy on how to love properly BUT HE TRIED OKAY, HE TRIED. He learned to change his ways and lessen his fit of rages. He says sorry whenever he hits someone which is fucking rare to semes. Bare minimum but he's a victim of pysical abuse and he just adapted that reaction. I'm not defending him but I understand why he does it. He was an illegitimate child and he owned nothing during his hs years. Of course he would keep clinging to jiwook's affection, that's the only thing he had in his entire life. It became a spark of light in his blackpitch life. His anger obviously came from the feeling of betrayal. Since he wasn't the best, he also did make bad decisions such as raping jiwook in season 2. He even probably got an abandonment issues hence why he kept locking him up. Yes he is twisted, but he's not a bad guy.
And come the fuck on, if you hate these type of characters maybe you should avoid reading tags with "yaoi" on it and instead read the ones with a "shounen ai" tag. the story was good too. Even the way it was told was not confusing at all. I've read a lot of stories and in comparison to others, this is quite a good read. You'll definitely get annoyed by it since the characters acted way too much like a real person who makes bad decisions and does bad things from time to time but that is exactly its own charm. The pacing wasn't bad either. What I only wish is for this to have a side story. After everything they've been through, they deserve some cute ass chapters.
This is suprisingly fluffy. Such a cute short story. However, I'm still curious what actually happened to noeul that made the police come to his house when they were younger. Why did gangjin have to look for him? Why did he want to be found? What actually happened to him and his mom there? Anyway, they're still cute.
And this is ALNST ivantill if they were given a chance to live a different life (if only vivimeng loves happiness)
Damn I love this. I love how their traumas can literally be healed by being together without having a shitty cliche backstory of knowing each other during their childhoods.
And I can't believe I'm crying over a child's tooth growing, I don't even like babies but jaeyoon! I know you for a day but if something bad happens to you, I will kill everyone in this room and then myself. The doting uncles are adorable as well, I might as well join them and be jaeyoon's auntie.
This fell so short, I was starting to get more invested. Where's the imprinting? When would jaeha finally start trusting jiyoon fully to finally imprint and get married?? I have so many questions yet it's already done. Damn, this is such a waste potential, A TRUE WASTE URRGGGGHH I JUST BADLY NEED MORE
If you wanna take a break from all the heavy angsty read yet still want a tinge of angst, you can read this. Gawd, I'm a homosexual myself but I hate gay people. They're just so happy. Makes me wanna jump off of a cliff /j
Jokes aside, they're so cute I'm combusting. And their bottoms are so slutty, I'm loving it aaacckkkk!! I'm just craving for more donghee x hotae, I was getting invested in them yet they only got one chapter in the side story. That made me a bit sad. But the mains are cute so I ain't complaining
I'm def rooting for hatano and mc to end up together. He doesn't seem to be the type to be fazed so easily, making his feelings more genuine and less for the bl plot according to their universe. Unlike the other guys that approached mc, they easily got transferred to another person, I wish hatano wouldn't be like that. I hope mc realizes after hatano's promised 3 years time skip that this kid likes him for real, and being with him just doesn't mean filling out a bl plot according to their universe, but creating a genuine connection with hatano and living his best life without being overly cautious and just like him freely bc that's what he actually feel.
Anyways, GANBARE! HATANO-KUN!
Reading this makes me want to romanticize relationship. They're so goddamn cute, my cheek hurts from smiling and laughing too much. I will die for them, honestly
I'm such a sucker for this type of concept. Goodness, it's going to be my new personality for next week. I love how Yiseon managed to make Hyeon feel fear, probably for the first time in his life too. Love love the fact that Hyeon didn't manage to heal Yiseon's trauma. Love will never heal you from anything, it could only help you, and Yiseon managed to pull himself out of that hellhole with the help of Hyeon and the rest of the chord.
Also love how Yiseon is not a damsel in distress, love my OP mcs. Thus why I'm obsessed with this kind of concept, characters could never be a damsel in distress. Yiseon is basically a god for being able to destroy and restore.
It would have probably been better if it didn't became a love triangle thing. That ruined it, and now we see how jiseok deserves a redemption more than wooseo ending up with jigeon. I feel like wooseo became a real pushover for accepting jigeon after being deceived. There should have been a chasing arc without wooseo being manipulated to do things. It's like he doesn't even have any thoughts for himself
Rereading this and gosh dang it, park jiyeon's art is really superb when it comes to conveying emotions. Gonghyeon and cheongsoon are the embodiment of right person wrong time. Their love is just so beautiful it makes me cry. Plus the fact that they're so mature makes it perfect. I really love this. I love them so much
This felt like stagnant waters. You can remove one trope in this story and it still wouldn't change anything. What was the omegaverse for anyway? It still literally would work without it. And the antagonist is weak as fuck. He got ended just like that. He couldn't even fight back. They gave the ML too much power that it made it so easy to take revenge. He should have done that earlier before he met the MC if he was this powerful.
Weak backstory, weak emotional attachments, weak storytelling, they fuck every 3 chapters, and they fuck that also last 3 chapters each. They fuck more than they talk. They communicate through their ass and dicks. Whatever, everything is bland from the story to the character relationships.
Good heavens I have never love a story as much as this I think I'm about to cry for finishing it. I've been attached to stories but not to the point where I could cry for finishing it but this???? My god I'm feeling so emotional. I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS STORY UWAAHHHHH! No critic, just love. As an ex-MMO player, I feel nostalgic from their settings. I miss my clanmates. I miss my gaming days. I miss being a higher ranker and grinding 24/7 without sleep. Arcadia reminds me of Dragon Raja with my loli character. I feel nauseous from nostalgia.
And I love how the story balances the part where they interact through game and interact in real life. Usually, they only use the game set up as an introduction and then completely forget about it as the story progresses as if game couples that became irl couples would actually stop playing after being preoccupied with each other. BUT THAT'S NOT HOW IT WORKS! Them playing together is a DATE! It's a form of couple BONDING! They should KEEP PLAYING! anyway! Heejae and Seyoung are my babies now. I love the backstory as well, it just explain the actions and decisions they do. And Seyoung is my kin, we crave for genuine connection but afraid of getting into one :c I wish they both can hug each other's sad forever :'c
The dynamic of this quartet is so damn funny I can't help but laugh every time they interact. I didn't expect to love this story so much. Seungha and Jaehyun is just that one meme of " I can't stand this bitch" to "me and my bestie" 5 minutes later. Plus the fact that Seungtae was the "lit major boy" I'm crying shit tears from laughing at this part, it was so fucking embarrassing I had to stop reading for a minute and laugh out loud. The storytelling was effin' good bruv you will not regret reading this. And Seungtae is so poetic, I can't forget that line of " are we festering or rotting?", that kinda hits ya' know. Anyway, I will keep these 4 deeply in my heart. Especially Jeahyun and Seungtae, they're my precious babies now
I didn't know a 4-5 chapter story can pack so much things. The story is literally complete, no plothole, no more questions asked and they managed to fit it inside 4-5 chapters like that's a goodass storytelling my god. I love them so much, everything just flowed so smoothly with them, their relationship felt like calm waves, it put me in so much ease.
I barely finished the 1st season because it was so tiring to read for some unknown reason. MC is such a whore, I dropped it at 2nd season when he kissed Jisung after learning why he was left behind while ML was going around from town to town to find some fucking medicine for him. He's a real whore my fucking god. I don't blame him for what happened with Yusaran but he also fucked Beakrang so where do we go from here? Anyway, that kissing scene with jisung was my last thread of patience with this story. It's so fucking long just to find out it's not worth it. Good thing I checked the topic comments after that chapter. I seriously love traumatic stories, I live for it. Hell, I weirdly even love the manhwa warehouse, but this??? Nah. This ain't it. Sura deserves a stronger lover. He should have ended up with Yusaran instead.
Hmmmm I love it. There's so many underlying traumas here. These bitches can pack up many more traumas to come.
Jokes aside, I love how the story made you understand both of them. Yes, it's fucked up. Yes, it's not justifiable. Yes, it's unforgivable. But that doesn't mean we cannot understand their human side. Or maybe I just love fucked up stories. I guess trauma x trauma is just my thing. This is like 5 steps ahead of form of sympathy. I love that story too.
Can't believe a simple switch up of powerclass can change a lot of things. This is peak omegaverse
PS: Puppy tops are the best. They're so pathetically in love. I personally love the heart in hyeonoh's eyes when they have sex