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Before I start reading this, I need anyone who has read this to answer a few questions of mine. If you have read it and can help, pls do:
How many ppl has the uke been graped by the start of the story and throughout the rest of the story?
Does uke get graped by other people, if so who and which chapters? Is the story like Pearl boy or it's contemporaries where the uke is constantly gang graped by secondary characters?
Until which chapter does the seme keep grading the uke?
Also does this story have a love triangle? Do the main characters have a romance with other characters thru the story?
Finally, is the story almost at its end?
THANK YOU to anyone who answers the questions sincerely :)) it seems like an interesting story with good character development but I hate shock and awe grape scenes so i just wanna be aware of what im going into.
No love triangle, no gangrape, badass uke….but the uke was forced to sleep with seme, and yeah one second character who put his hand inside the uke peaches because the seme told uke his peaches were loose as way of dirty talk but uke definitely dont understand dirty talk ,so he asked the second guy to checked but got caught by seme who was dumbfounded by that logic. But its not that heavy and second character could not even be counted as love rival….read it … 100% ur style…seme have great character development and his redemption chapter were really good too…
Thnx sm for the reply!! Also, love ur username :))
So the seme asks this secondary character to basically SA the uke by fingerings him? Srry I'm a Lil confused Also has the uke gotten SA'd or graped before the start of the story like when he was a kid by pedos or bc he's in debt?
Srry I hv mass trauma from yaois
Mc is the one who asks the side chara to put his hands "in his pants" to check if he was loose bc of ml's dirty talk (to put it lightly).
And mc wasn't SA-ed before as a child or anything. Like the original reply said, the only dubious/non con was with the ml.
LMAOOO what uke asks his frnd to put his fings in his hooha to check if he's loose that's crazyyy but a vibe nonetheless
Wait wait wait… some misunderstanding is there…seme doesnt asked for Sa…its hard to explain that part again but NO uke isnt SA as a kid, no pedos… but some debt collector did try to SA him in start of chapter but uke knocked him out which basically leads to uke encounter with seme as seme is the boss of the gang, but seme did kind of rape uke and later on force him to sell his body to him only .. compared to pearl boy this is so much lighter just typical selling body to seme omegaverse shit…read it …worth it… and it almost end too
ILY sm thank u for this reply and clearing up the misunderstandings!!! Will give this a try bc I'm starved for acc well written stories
(●'◡'●)ﾉ no problem
Lol! I totally get why you asked all of these questions because one has to enter the world of the omegaverse yaois fully prepared. Fret not, it's not as scary as you think and the seme started out as a red flag that became the greenest of flags in no time.
LOVE THIS CONGREGATION OF AWESOME REPLIES, thanks yall!
4/10 man ( the 4 points are for having no SA, the top being unproblematic, and the queen)
TLDR; Usually love Moscareto's stories and characters but this one was NOT a vibe. MC had the personality of a wet paper towel and his character didn't have any dimensionality. ML was meh. Story was inconsistent and ideas fragmented, some parts were extremely realistic and others were unbelievable.
I wanted to like this so bad bc I love Moscareto and the art of this story is top, which is the only reason I read the whole thing, usually I drop midway if I don't like the story as much as I hated this one. Bc it's Moscareto I just kept praying it would get better but it just NEVER did
Like MC cries at every single thing, he didn't even feel 1 dimensional, he just felt invisible. I think I knew more about Jung's personality than I did the MCs. I get being emotional and traumatized but I thought that as the story progressed and he became more relaxed, slowly we would start seeing the layers in his personality but NOPE, how would we see any if there are none (╯°Д °)╯╧╧ I don't hate pushover characters (sure I get annoyed at them but no hate), but this character was so annoying, he had no traits except crying and loving the prince ig. I don't NEED a strong bottom but at the very least they should have some personality . The queen who got introduced like in the last quarter of the story had more character than either of the characters and unfortunately was the only one I was rooting for. The ML had a 2D personality bc he showed some personality traits and explained the reasoning behind his actions throughout the story. Although his thoughts felt kinda fragmented in the middle (tbh I genuinely couldn't tell whether he trusted the MC or not until the whole thing with the queen) I thought that he was a typical green flag top, nothing special but hey if this story had a bottom who had an actual personality, it could've worked!
I couldn't understand the stuff about the omega shit, like is he an omega or NAH??? by the end of the story is he a normal person??? Like what is this storytelling!?!??!?! I was also extremely annoyed with how they had to make the treatment of the bottom and the comments directed towards him so realistic later on but they didn't do the same for the outcome of his circumstances. Like ok we all see what's happening to Markle rn right? U think ANYONE in a royal fam would sit still if someone with such a weak personality who had a panic attack on tv, is a man, and who has this type of background married the royal prince. Yall the public would be the LEAST of their worries, the prince would have been disowned and maybe bottom would've been murdered, if not by him then by his dad and bro. He's still a prince, doesnt matter whether he displays the traits. At least Megan and Harry had some type of dollars and fame to be able to leave, these two have jack. If you're gonna make the reporters comments and his treatment realistic, at least follow thru. Also why did the ML like the MC? I get why the MC would bc this is the first person who's acc treated him with respect since his captivity but why the ML. Honestly it seemed like the ML liked him from the beginning bc of how oddly their first meeting was portrayed but I still don't understand why. Ig it's bc of how innocent and clueless he is?? But why does he like this cluelessness and lack of knowledge sm??
Anyways, usually I don't write reviews but this story irritated me sm