okay FEEDBACK TIME
the start is good but the ending seems rush and messy. i want to learn more about the novel and the different timeline, where the hell did she get that novel idea and why the hell the novel like that has a very different ending like the other timeline, expect if it really happen. AND she won't 'think of the timeline as a randomly events in the novel' because the duke keeps returning the time again and again everytime she died that means the event in the novel where kay and the duke fell in love with each other never happen?? THEHELL!! the story is so good but goes in a different way that it messed the story. ALSO I THOUGHT KAY WAS AN OLD PERVERT WOMAN FROM KOREA THAT READ THE NOVEL TOO??!!!WHAT HAPPENED!!
oh well at least it's cute uhuh, i can't even take the fighting scene that serious because he's cute haha, the fact his human forma and slime form hasa different personalities
yes the FL is OP but the fact that she can't show it that much is such a waste of power. the fighting scene is really little, i'm expecting a lot of fighting scene since she's indeed powerful but what's the point of being THAT powerful if not being able to show it that much? it's so focus on family and her realizing her love for kahill... probably because the title is younger princess and it's focus on family bond more (yeah, my curiosity, my answer)
i just want to see her fight because it's so cool having that lot of power, she's one of the FL i want. but erm, such a waste that the main story ended already, just gonna watch and see how powerful her future child too since it will be indeed power power.
damn, that made me cry. the fact that she died and go back in time AS A CHILD really hits me and it hurt like hell, WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS TO OUR BABY TIEL
what's with her dreams? it's like some kind of dreaming about the future, is that her power? isn't she a human? let me guess, her real mother is a parrotbill or something and she's a half-half making her the last remaining parrotbill.
I'm going to guess you didn't actually read this because she's full human, they lied about her begin a parrorbill because humans are slaves there. Also she doesn't have a power she's from another world and somehow ended up in one of her favourite books
first i appreciate you for explaining, but i'm talking about her vivid dream that she keeps talking about, the dream she had where she suddenly woke up and start again to where ruby's parents is outside his room, her dream is the reason she's going to leave but strangely she believes her dream that means she keep having that kind of dream again and again. it's like some kind of foresee, but yes i think her being a parrotbill is a zero percent, since they only have healing ability (if i could still remember)
If I remember correctly from the spoilers I've read her mom is not human
Not sure if I'm correct so don't quote me on that + pretty sure spoilers are still in the comments so try finding them :)
Spoiler
She is not fully human, her mother was the last parotbill, she ran away from her family because they locked her up to use her power and she hated theriantropes because of that which is why the father also hated them, I don't think the father knew she was? So he also doesn't know she has these dreams and that she isn't fully human.
so i'm right. i kinda guess it when i heard that the parrotbill has gone extinct and then there's her sudden mysterious dream kenemi. well thankyouu
You're welcome!
eveldina and regina could have been a good friends, she's the perfect villain i've ever seen, the real definition of "villain is not born, they are made" something like that. she's a villain shaped by a painful betrayal of the person she loved. AHHH i love the ending, a happy ending indeed. i want to see Aaron and regina's love stroy, regina's guard love story, and may more. so please please pleaseee notify me if the side story is out, replying to my comment will do and i will love you for all my life.
damn her full name is so long and also hold great power, being a duke's daughter and a princess. she have everything, three brother, a powerful dragon, and a power, two father though both have a decrease wife... okay i gues she doesn't have everything since she doesn't have a mother (doesn't mean it in the bad way, forgive me)
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAH THE REALIZATION AFTER NAMING WHAT SHE HAS.
Let me visualize the scenario, you were typing then... "Oops deceased wives, no mother... "
just fucking give kim dan his own live interest please, it's either a boy or a girl as long as it's not that horse. he's just behaving like a kid for now but what about next time, he's just doing that to get kim dan and fix himself and then to win a fight again, so please give kim dan another handsome man i'm begging you cuz i'm crying because of my baby's condition huhu
some how can kinda relate to jia. i was writing because i'm bored and the followers and the views really blinded me, i enjoyed it. but then, one day i suddenly lost interest. the table was now turned, i write because i'm bored and now i'm bored of writing. i'm starting to doubt myself, do people seriously enjoy my story or they are also getting bored like me? i lost my motivation and that seriously effect my writing so i ghosted my readers... thinking about it now, i feel sorry for leaving without a word.
where did you post your writings?
i usually post on facebook, wattpad, and that one story app that i forgot the name. tho i deleted my wattpad account, i still kept my facebook account but i private all of my story because i got tired of them
aw man well i hope you give yourself some time. only do it if you want to not because you have to ^^
aww thankyou, i just lost my motivation but i do hope i will start to see the joy in writing again because i kinda miss it. thankyousomuch :>
at least give us a side story please, i'm begging, or even just an alternative world where he go with her in the modern world