
I usually never complain about art style but damn…why is this so ugly?

If you think so sure. I hate how everything is drawn except one thing. How faces look when they’re squished. That’s pretty good. Everything else is a crappy mix between Full Volume and Painter of the Night. I can tell that’s the style they’re replicating because it’s a pretty unique one (less unique now I guess) I hate how mc’s mouth and nose looks the most tho. I just.::HATE the noses and mouths of both MC and ML. Why is it literally 口?? Like >口< that’s what his face look like!!!

I found this so hard to take seriously for the first 30 chapters ngl because everyone was soool dramatic. I can hear words I read in my head (as I expect everyone can?) and reading those words were just comedic. Like bro really got divorced over a cake? His wife was frustrated by the fact he couldn’t taste?? Now, I know his lack of taste is mostly an allegory for his inability to feel and accurately express emotion. But they really only wrote to this after the 30 chapters. Before that it was all about his lack of taste. And when he was talking about the fact he can’t taste and he said “IM ALREADY BROKEN!” I was trying not to laugh so hard because that is just funny. My mum is actually taste blind. She has a significantly impacted sense of smell and taste meaning she can’t smell or taste most things unless they are really strong. Still….most people don’t even notice. And she doesn’t really give af. Interestingly she makes great food. It’s probs because even if you can’t taste you can still feel the sensations of salt and spice and sweet on your tongue.

I can’t help but wonder is the desire to be raped is some world class fetish that sells really well or smth considering the esperverse, omegaverse and cakeverse are all built on dubcon/noncon situations and preceding this, as long as BL has been a thing it’s always involved the bottom being conquered against his will. No one better reply with “but there are onegaverse without rape” I know that. But the majority remains noncon/dubcon. The consensual ones are usually outliers. In any case, in so tired of this kind of stuff and anima in general. It’s so formulaic and repetitive. Even shounen and shoujo series too. I’m just gonna stick to shounen ai, seinen and Josei

I’m praying this doesn’t go down a path I don’t like. They set up the story and couple so well now that they’re together I hope it continues and isn’t just all sex. I want them to talk and hang out like before as well. Why random office sex scene 1 day after you confess? It’s ok. It’s not such a big thing that I mind but it was random (in the context of this manga. Like I know that’s normal for yaoi but they really set up this one well so I thought it would be a little different)

Why do they always make these kinda stories into porn? Is sufferance and hardship a turn on? Sighhh there are ways to write rape scenes that don’t clearly show that the author is thinking “ooh yum rape :P” and sometimes authors write such such realistic sad stories like this only to spoil us by so clearly making it fap material. And sure as an audience member you may not take away that it’s porn but it is. It is intentional. I hate it.

It just makes me think like:…does drawing lolicon material where the pedo is tortured and killed or arrested at the end make you any less of a fucking weirdo? No. You decided to draw loli porn anyway. Like….to me the author I don’t think even cares. He just wants to write sad story about sad woman being an abused and being sad. Ugh. UGHHHHHHHHBHH

It was actually still quite disturbing despite the "oversexualized" scenes--probably because of the horrifying atmosphere that the story sets itself in, its often moody and dark. It seriously does not feel like porn to me--its drawn in a deliberately gross way and it kind of feels like a mockery of most hentais out there that DO romanticize sexual assault. Though, I can't really guarantee that that is what the author wants to portray. Just my perspective tho!

Nah it’s porn. It’s about artistic intention more than interpretation. And you’re not considering that the ugly bastard and humiliation thing is its own (very popular) fetish. It reminds me of people who claim Metamorphosis is actually some deep sad story and not just porn made to capitalise off of rape, sexual assault, drug addiction and forced prostitution. Having a woman fall into disarray and traumatised and become a mess, a mess reliant on the men around her, having her sole male protector be betrayed or being forced to betray him are alllll fetishes popular in hentai. People are just gross.

Like as in im sure 90% of readers found this disturbing and it’s because of YOUR morals. It’s against your morals to find this sexually appealing. Back to my lolicon analogy, there’s some REALLY horrifying stuff out there where the perp is tortured or is arrested at the end but it doesn’t stop the story from being loli porn. And I find it very disturbing to read sure but the author definitely made it using only one hand. You get what I mean?

I supposed so! After actually giving it more thought, I just discontinued reading this. Its just hard to see how the story--taking a theme about violence against women--was told in the perspective of a male character and I highly doubt the author is a woman. I do wish artists who had the talent to create gruesome atmospheres portrayed sexual assault as what it is; horrifying and dehumanizing without the unnecessary porny shit that sells well to a bunch of sickos. Thanks for the comment!

Npp Its also really depressing how tgeres a chance that all of this could/is actually happening here irl its truly awful
So i guess it really depends on how much you can take but ur right if they are going to draw those acts, they should due it in a not like porn u would see in nh way and in a way that potrays how depressing things are for some people who didint get the chance to be in a more livable environment

I know I probably come across as preachy and virtue signalling but this shit genuinely gets me mad. I’m proud and happy the audience doesn’t find this sexy but we’re naive to think that the artist isn’t at least turned on by some of the scenes. And as an artist myself, the artist of this story can draw many different types and styles of men clearly. If he can only draw one type of female character, skinny with HUGE tits then….what am I supposed to say? You don’t HAVE to draw every single type of body type but a good artist would at least know how to truly make her look worse as in you can imagine she’s not well fed, she can’t take care of herself, she lives in a dirty environment. Yknow? You’d see her bones. Her skin would be pallid, bruised and pale. Her breast may droop due to the lack of food. Her face may be sunken and hollow. Her hair would like messy and matted. Etc etc. she can still have big tits and you know…look like she actually fits the happenings of the story. Can you imagine how hard the story would be to read if she looked like that? I just wish they’d do that. Sighhhh. SSSIIGHHHHH.
Maybe this is all some secret ploy to get incels to read this shit for the boobs but end up developing empathy towards her hahahha
Ugh. I like the ML and MC but I don’t think I can like HOW he wins. It’s not smart nor clever. He is literally a privileged rich boy fucking over others because he’s rich and the other rich boys look away so they can also fuck people over. It feels sadistic. I know not every story has to resolve alpha omega politics but it just feels shitty. A boring way to win over others.
That's because it's like that in their world, of course he would use that way to win, you're so stupid it pisses me off
You sound like you’ve never watched the news in your life. Listen, I was going to explain why it disappoints me but I honestly don’t give a fuck. I’ll just say…their world? It’s like that in our world right now. Look outside! If the rich wanted you to disappear you would. How boring it’s just real life. That’s not what I came here for.
i wouldn't say privileged or boring. he was literally treated like trash his whole life until he became an awakened, & i imagine he had to deal with life or death situations bc of his step mom. i see this is as the ultimate revenge where he finally returns his gratitude by using that "privilege" while fucking over his enemies & whoever hurts his mate. this is his villain arc & i respect it haha
hey, speak to people how you want to be spoken to. going off on someone's opinion/perspective bc you don't approve of it shows your ignorance & immaturity.
How so? I'm just stating that it's already like that kind of world ever since the 1st chapter that dominant alpha's can get away with major crimes just because of their trait, and it's not the author's fault if they dont like it, if they find it boring then just dont read it. Gosh it's just simple as that.
Comments exist for a reason. I can whinge all I want. You didn’t have to reply anything to me?? Is the author gonna see my comments on this piracy site?? Wtf lmao
It’s hard for me to explain why it irks me. My first thought was so the group of them, all these rich fucks, is that they can murder, torture, rape and sexually abuse whoever they want at no consequence. Billionaires just do shit like that irl so it doesn’t come off as cool or impressive to me? It’s more like…I was reading this waiting for years the suspense was building and building I was like “how is he gonna save his omega? How is he going to protect him and marry his ass?” And then the answer is….that…the other alphas just don’t care because he’s the best alpha? He just went around bashing ppl and got out of it bc money and all his friends are sadists who want to continue abusing the law? Like sure our ML is 100% doing it to people who deserve it and it was satisfying for me to watch too. But his entourage…..=_=“ aaaaanyway I think I have a pretty unpopular opinion. I don’t HATE the story. I like it a lot and I’ll definitely reread this one like every year. I really liked it. That was literally my only issue.
now that you put it that way, i completely agree. it felt underwhelming when they went that route with the whole "alphas don't care bc they were born with privilege. that's the plot, don't question it" trope. i wish the author built onto why shin is the ultimate alpha & how everyone isn't dumb enough to go after him or his mate instead of the sudden foreshadowed reveal. i feel like it cheapened the experience for sure. but the difference in personality with how he treats his omega is soo fuckn endearing haha
get off your high horse. freedom of speech exists for a reason regardless of your beliefs. why do you think you have the right to order them around just bc you disagree with them? i actually initially disagreed with their perspective, but you don't see me attacking them & pushing my narrative onto them?
Agreed! I love them, they’re so cute I I love shin so much. Probably one of my favourite omega characters alongside the omega from unromantic.