beta
Art is good, translations ain't that bad, story is good and idk how to describe the plot
It was going so well even though everything seems wayy too slow for me but it was fine.. until I got to the part where I began to think the ML had feelings for his sister.. I didn't wanna think that way until I saw an art of them kiss in the very first page of the next chap.. why.. WHY DID YALL CHOOSE HIM AS THE MALE LEAD SDBHJCBSDVBGC
I know they aren't really siblings but it just rubbed me so BAD. I don't know how to explain but it don't feel right for me since I only view them as siblings the very first chap (I'm aware that at this time they both already know they aren't real siblings) and because of that freaking title too.
Anyways will pick this up when I'm fine at them being together.
It isn't really a bad story it's actually good.. though since I'm not really patient I view the whole story ( the pacing) slow (⌒▽⌒) but it's fine.
Worth the read if you don't mind the sibling troupe. Its up to you if you like it since they had reasons or not since you can't erase that both of them were siblings at first.
(If you don't get it don't worry I don't as well.)
PS. Pls if you're thinking about doing a story with a sibling troupe.. choose a better title.