beta
Idk how to describe the story but the plot got eaten by a rat by how many plot holes this story have.. and it's so fast paced that none of the information here has set in in my brain.. and idk if I'm tripping but the art also changed midway..
MC is fine but why does she do her plans so openly? Like for an example calling the great mage just like that outside the house WITH the ML just behind
And I don't understand how everyone seems to change their attitudes to her by simply just that.. mostly for the ML.. and let's not forget how he fell in love so fast that we couldn't even see any development around them.. it's just simply like that.
Still gonna read this since it's not that bad ┑(￣Д ￣)┍.. hopefully there's a BIG development on the next chapters..