This is unrealistic even for being a webtoon. The FL and ML are supposed to be in the national swimming team? Like wtf? Those are not swimmers bodies AT ALL, if author wanted to make a background for their character to interact, they could have made an art club or something, but a NATIONAL swimming team? Even I am offended. The overall story it's a mess, jumping between escenes with little explanation as of why something happened...maybe I'll try to read it when completed dunno
I feel like there's too many plots at once, to the point one can't figure out the main line of the story. Firstly, we are barely knowing the struggles of the FL after returning to her original world, which could have been really interesting, but instead we are met with a lot of secondary MLs delving really little into each their character so it's hard to empathyze or like them to be honest. Then, the FL herself doesn't really seems to detach herself from her old persona, always trying to help others to her own detrimental. I know her helping others it's what keeps the story going, but I feel there could have been more coherent ways to do it, ie meeting ML while getting her house destroyed, accidentally touching others espers (not purposely since she wants a normal life apparently) etc. Maybe this story it's not made for me? Or I'm not made for this story, dunno
Duce if you truly love him them TALK IT OUT, don't became a fricking rapist arghgg
Read the raws and can't read korean for shit but this is basically what happens
FL (ginger girl)
ML (dark haired guy)
SFL support female lead(dark haired female friend)
SML (blondie guy)
First-FL relaises ML may be a player and since he is eary similar to SFL ex-cheating+bf and hears rumours about him. ML mistake this interest for romantic feelings and since they accidentally kiss he proposed for them to date, FL accepts. The start dating bit FL is not really in love just midly interested in him.
Secondly- SML is a the FL friend but he has a big crush in her, can't really accept her dating ML, it seems both FL and SML try to practice dating since FL is a newbie to dating, they make ML jealous
Third- SFL who was cheated still doesn't know FL is dating but is suspicious, she discovers later on the FL and ML dating and almost has a stroke, cuz ML is way to similiar to her ex and is scared for FL to suffer the same destiny of being heartbroken
Fourth- after some miscommunication between all characters they all ended up talking, SML and SFL befriend each other, FL and ML keep seeing each other
THAT'S IT, IT KIND OF HAS AN INCONCLUSIVE ENDING
Save yourself some time and don't read this, you will end up disappointed
Better read Cheese in the trap or I Love Yoo, those are way more interesting with similar premises
This works on paper but in reality she would break up so fast with him he couldn't have the time to say "guinea pig" ┑(￣Д ￣)┍
I hope he either changes along the story or I'm dropping this
Naaah I dont aprove, this type of censorship is straight up ABUSE WTF
Girl you are waaay to good for your own good, fuck that young boy get some collagen in your system and move on already!!
I understand that having you SO having late night calls with another woman can be a source of jealousy but is not like it's a constant in the relationship, I mean he has a tournament coming up and has the right of having friends, no matter the gender of such. And even if I understand all that, I can relate to feeling hurt for not being prioritised over the bf's friends sometimes...I feel like both sides are right and wrong, and somehow when two persons can't get to middle ground they tend to split up, although I hope this doesn't happen with this too, since this is fantasy and most likely will have a happy ending. In real life they would broken up for sure
The thing is I don’t know if you remember but in the beginning akane’s ex boyfriend left her because he met a girl during his gaming online and fell in love with that woman. So I feel like her feelings are super justified here because she’s afraid history’s gonna repeat itself and Yamada’s not the best at communication so Akane naturally does not know that Yamada only views that other girl as just a gaming friend.
I could never understand how ppl normalize their partner having a friendship with the other gender , these kind of friendships never work and never will and will only ruin your relationship in the long run
Well, I looove our female and male protagonist (and his father holly smokes ) but somehow something it's lacking for me. I would have liked for ex-husband to have appeared more, to see him suffer, fall into despair, repent to find too late that all his efforts to gain his ex wife back are in vain. To see his face contrite with pain and regret, to scar his face from digging his nails under his eyes from frustration...and then see the arc where FL can finally find happiness with her new squeeze (and his father
this!! and suddenly the ml is so lacking in expressions it feels like im reading a different story now
For real, reading the ML expressions is watching a foreign movie without subs,we can only guess if hes happy, showing contempt or horny by the surrounding context ┑(￣Д ￣)┍
ikr and I hate how rushed their first time was I wish it was after they properly communicated their feelings