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this was actually pretty good, but idk i just feel like there’s something missing - hopefully the side stories will make up for it.
i feel so bad for shin’s family, man that was so sad and keith?? his father is his grandfather and his mother is his sister OKAY???? anyways, i love their golden retriever x black cat dynamic, IT ALWAYS EATS and they’re so cute together, i can’t wait to see them in the sides
loved the three friends. - john, max and carrie right, such cutie patooties and wish we saw more of allen. i have a love hate relationship with ramirez but her background is also so sad and the last chapter seeing her family was depressing man. i was honestly expecting her to lighten up on shin and they trauma bond and become besties and then get together with carrie i definitely didn’t expect her to die wtf also max’s ex-partner was a cutie too, i was shipping them (also allen and his partner)
good story though, quite similar to guide verse but also very unique as well. cant for the side stories (i say again for the millionth time)