beta
I quite like the plot it's promising
It just that the delivery of the story is sort of questionable they're not that bad but they're quite far from good and it doesn't sit well with me atm
There's parts where it's relatable, some parts are actually delivered on the right time and places but there's alot that feels like it isn't even needed
(Though this is still pretty early in the story so i might be wrong on this, still I feel like they could've come up with better scenarios to progress the story with(〜￣△￣)〜)
It still looks like it's the beginning so I have some hope