
disappointed torikai wasn’t the one to approach yajima first. it would show character growth that he could overcome his fears of confrontation and hard conversations because he loves yajima and wants him back. having him never reach out (even if he thinks yajima doesn’t want to see him) just continues to make torikai look weak. i really hope the next chapters show him properly apologizing and proving to yajima that going forwards torikai will communicate with him. bc right now it seems like yajima is the one putting in more effort.
see for me the freaky deranged porn doesn’t hit unless there is a certain amount of build up and personality to the characters. this was just boring lol. sucks bc i enjoy captivity and stockholm syndrome stories and was hoping this would be somewhat interesting.
Maybe Lima Syndrome or Vivarium could help??? Idk abt Stockholm syndrome but I know they got captivity (pretty sure it's been a while since I've read em)
And yeah this was good but... not as good as it coulda been