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Thanks to the good samaritan who provide link to 27 chapters of this even though it's awful and feels like google translate. Still thank you!

The arts is good, well drawn. The plot however is terrible. I can still tolerate this pseudo-incest thingy but inappropriate touch without consent is fucked-up and seducing without first letting the younger girl know that it was just a contract marriage of her parents without physical relationship (I assume) is wild.

I don't understand how keeping the younger girl in the dark is necessary for the plot. They met before but she doesn't remembered, why are you waiting for her to remember it by herself, what's the point really. Just fucking tell her. Also falling in love with a minor even though no action taken whatsoever is rather questionable imo.

Getting her to sign a contract without her knowing that you help her behind the scene, for what? Acting tsundere is not needed at all.


Sorry for my rant. Feel free to read if it's your cup. It's not mine.