beta
I have come out of this a changed man. I legit started crying and lost all sex drive. It's time to delete the internet. I've seen worse but this broke the camel's back. Imma go live in the woods or some shit. Just away from humanity for a bit.(●￣(ｴ)￣●)
It wasn't that bad. I've definatly read way worse, but I've also read better. The characters could've done with more explanation or a longer story. But I definitely saw parts of myself in the main character having also been in an abusive relationship. There's comfort in the known. You don't know how to act when someone is actually good to you. You're constantly waiting for the other shoe to drop. I agree the second person comong in wasn't best for the story. But this is also a smut so you shouldn't expect good story telling lol. 8/10 for a smut story but 6/10 as a general story. Could've used better pacing.