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Bro I can't with this story
U can be silly and fun but it brushes over the biggest plot point like crazy. She LITTERALLY learned all the abuse she went through and same with the other girl was because of a mistake of another person and she brushes past that. Also after the beginning of the story she never starts to worry about her past life and career OR ANYTHING for that matter in her original body. Like she was never stressed, cried, or gotten angry in her hard situation.
An author can make it a comedy but sit have hard hitting, serious plot points. This is just terrible writing bro