
The camera scene was such a big turn off... how hard did he have to push for it to come out and land on a camera that's like one(maybe even one and a half) feet from him??? anyways, wish this was longer, would've been at least a 4.5 if the plot wasn't 92% sex, at least was 10 chapters or more, and the Mc wasn't a 5'1 2020 alt tiktok twink who wasn't 10 years younger than the man he master bated to since he was 15!(aka, the ADULT man he rubbed one out to almost every day since he was a minor) the artstyle is beautiful, it was just wasted on a author who doesn't know how to write
I think I'm being scammed, where's the baby? where's the rest of this story?