
uhm i think it's better if we understand the depth of the character better. he's been thru the first life and the second life in the battlefield i don't think someone like that would be mindlessly doing some stunt ass cool move all of a sudden especially since he wants to live a "normal" life. i know some of us love a cool and strong mc but i think making him so op makes him bland and doesn't really stood out from the rest it looks like all cliche and "cool" stuff get smashed and mixed and then they just let it out like that without thinking about the depth of the story anymore, it's really sad to see since the drawing is not bad at all. i think it's also a good idea that he's been thru 2 previous life but someone whose been thru such life can be wiser in term of choosing their decision. and throwing out companion and just popping out girls here and there won't work well, again it's bland, i also notice people seems to think the girl as annoyance because those girls are again just a filling that doesn't really have base and the purpose of creating them is like a broken glass that are covered with paper to close the broken part, which again will not hold well. it's like closing them with something just because people wants it, making the background of each character to make the reader maybe more invested in those charas i think is also an important part in enjoying a great masterpiece! since i see this manga havin so much potential!
IM GONNA LOOKING FORWARD FOR THIS MASTERPIECE! DEFFOOO!!